Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Nowadays, the advances in the technology plays an important role in our lives. Due to this fact, people want to use it in different aspects of their lives which help them to save their time and deal with a few problems. In addition, all people such as adults and children take advantage of the modern technology. Many people deem that this development may make problem for young people like decreasing their creativity. Other people hold the opposite view. Although not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelming, I agree with the idea in spite of the some problems of the technology, it enhances the quality of level children's lives especially their creativity. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
First of all, the first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the new technology provides a great condition for students who want improve their knowledge. To clarify, today these people can get many informations on the internet so that they can learn a lot of things in a short time. Take my brother as an example, he is a student and he gets various information from the internet which helps him to achieve a high degree in his test. Therefore, I am strongly on a belief that if children use the technology in the right way, it not only helps them in their studies but also enhances their creativity because it enables them to do new and dissimilar things.
Second, there is another reason which deserves some words. When young people use the modern technology, they do not waste their time, compared to the past. Because this advancement provides a condition for people to do unlike things in a little time. To shed more light on this issue, if we assume a student who should write a paper, he/she can use the different software to do this task as soon as possible with high creation which this advanced technology provides it. Thus, they do not face many difficulties during their works and it increases their satisfaction.
However, it might not always hold true. No one omits this fact that if kids spend a lot of time to use the modern technology, it will have a bad impact on their physical and mental health and it is obvious they cannot be creative like past.
All main points considered, it appears to be good to draw a reasonable conclusion that I insist that creativity of children can be enhanced by the technology. To summarize the reasons, not only do the technology increases the creativity of young generation due to saving the time but also improving their knowledge so that they can invent new things.
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79777777778 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70168580202 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504444444444 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8802763855 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.95 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133511571327 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415816726202 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421156118787 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909925781541 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344114258903 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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