There can be several advantages to spending time living in another country. Talk about one advantage and explain why living in another country provides these advantages. Use details and examples in your response
Nowadays more people desire to experience overseas living. The reason behind this is that it carries various advantages that helps them to improve their lives in different ways. Each person considers special factors as benefits of living abroad based on their opinions. While from my point of view, the most important of those factors can be having new experiences, broadening horizons, and obtaining excellent qualifications.
First and foremost, they will have more opportunity to gain new experiences. They will come across many challenges and unexpected situations that they will have to deal with by themselves. To put the discussion into a wider context, consider students who go abroad in order to further study. They have to get to know how to manage their budget in order to avoid financial troubles. Moreover, they learn how to adapt in a new environment so as to have enjoyable life.
The second reason is that it helps people to expand their knowledge. They will be more exposed to different ideas, cultures, customs, and people. Take me as an example, when I stayed for 2 years in Canada I could improve my English language due to the communication with native people. In fact it was impossible to providing the basic necessities of life like food, cloth, shelter and so on without any interaction with people. In addition I made more friends that helped me to become familiar with the cultural and social norms more quickly.
Last but not least, residing in other countries gives a special identity to a person that allows him or her to stand out among people. To illustrate this fact, in my country many companies allocate high status and well paid professions to people who have studied or worked in other countries. They believe that the person will bring new methods, and skills which will help them to be successful among their competitors.
Taking into account all these factors, I think that going abroad and spending time there will be very beneficial for people. It contributes to expanding their knowledge, developing new skills, and being considered as a qualified person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to
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Suggestion: provide
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Suggestion: necessities
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Suggestion:
... providing the basic necessities of life like food, cloth, shelter and so on with...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...without any interaction with people. In addition I made more friends that helped me to b...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20207253886 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.170984455959 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0984455958549 0.0866891130778 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0414507772021 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.080310880829 0.0685040099705 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111398963731 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0414507772021 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70307052403 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.059585492228 0.0309702414327 192% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00259067357513 0.00188951952338 137% => OK
Determiners: 0.0518134715026 0.0887237588012 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0233160621762 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.020725388601 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2109.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 349.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04297994269 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.363896848138 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263610315186 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189111747851 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134670487106 0.112833075102 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70307052403 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604584527221 0.524397521467 115% => OK
Word variations: 71.0131612917 59.2087087015 120% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3684210526 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7352997465 48.84282405 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 44.7294525713 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.21238938053 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23443195669 0.300154397459 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0947253929162 0.103427244359 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0766288139666 0.0752933317313 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533088755559 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0995974259617 0.151897553556 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854586474137 0.114077575197 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365556835363 0.0781384742642 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.257336910868 0.336927656856 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.069882688183 0.067059652881 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145773155691 0.210909579961 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143173201398 0.0618886996521 23% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.