TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The importance of truth is always a question of good or bad for mankind. People always prefer listen to a sweet lie rather than a bitter truth. However, preference for truth varies depending on the situation we may confront.

At first, if your friend wear a new dress on his birthday and ask how it is or your friend gives a gift for in your birthday and ask you that did I like it, then all may give positive feedback , even though we don’t like it because we may don’t like to hurt other feeling. Similarly, we may even lie to forestall a beginning of dispute. For example : In my family, our parents, assuming they are always superior, are always narrow minded in issue of cast, religion. I know that it is bad sentiment but also I concede with them to preclude any argument.

Similarly, in a case of business, if salesman tells only an actual quality of product then nobody may be interested in buying that product. Therefore, their advertisement will be boasting about a quality that the product doesn’t possess.

However, telling a lie always doesn’t bring a suitable consequence. If you are fail in exam or incase of infidelity by husband or wife, the truth should be told at the same time. Concealing the truth may seem favorable at the beginning but in long term it has inimical consequences because a truth can be reveal any period of time, leading to make a person unable to trust for any activities in future. Further, it can also lead in festering of relationship between the person.

Thus, importance of truth should be consider according to situation ( how much a truth affect another person sentiment) in which a person is involved.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: INCASE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in case of'?
Suggestion: in case of
...consequence. If you are fail in exam or incase of infidelity by husband or wife, the trut...
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Line 7, column 322, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
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Suggestion: period
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...rson unable to trust for any activities in future. Further, it can also lead in festering...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
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Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76632302405 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74797230556 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.902202328 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147336706546 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530847194096 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298517365499 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770031596406 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357445144467 0.0645574589148 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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