The majority of people who are in their early to mid-twenties think that it is the most important consideration for people to tell the truth in any relationship between people. They support that it is stressful when they do not tell the truth. However, the notion does not reflect the stance that I hold and should be though about in a different light. I believe that it is not the most important consideration for people to always tell the truth in any relationship between people. This is because they are able to relieve stress and be successful people.
First of all, not telling truth between people enables them to relieve stress and restore health. To be specific, telling lie in some situation allows people to overcome their problems which makes better manage stress, manage health, and build a quality life. Stress is the main cause of disease, shorter life span, and dissatisfying life in general. As such, people in modern society should actively find ways to reduce stress and stay healthy. For example, when I was young, I had decayed tooth. However, at that time, I did not want to go to meet a dentist. Therefore, my mother told a lie, which made me go to the dentist and care my cavity, then I can fix my problem. Through this experience, I realized that sometimes telling lie is necessary to solve problems. Hence, this shows that it is not the most important consideration for people to always tell the truth in any relationship between people.
In addition, telling the truth is not always good in any relationship between people because people could not be success in their work. In fact, not telling the truth allows people to be success in their work. As modern society is becoming increasingly competitive, today’s world requires people with flexible speaking ability. People can do this better by not telling the truth at their work. For instance, according to a study done by the New York Times, it revealed that it is not the most important consideration for people to always tell the truth in any relationship between people. The study indicated that 62 percent of 200 Korean leading executives in leading corporations have experienced that sometimes it is beneficial for them to tell lie in business. This was because in business, people have to hide their companies’ confidence and do better their business. Thus, it is legitimate to say that it is not the most important consideration for people to always tell the truth in any relationship between people in order to prepare for the future.
All things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons I have mentioned above. Never should we forget that this issue may have a huge impact on our future.
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'in general', 'first of all', 'to tell the truth']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230623818526 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.179584120983 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0586011342155 0.0866891130778 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0680529300567 0.046263068375 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0718336483932 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122873345936 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0359168241966 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74478537451 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0396975425331 0.0309702414327 128% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0850661625709 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0132325141777 0.0209618222197 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00945179584121 0.0139019557991 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2775.0 2387.08602151 116% => OK
No of words: 473.0 408.028673835 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86680761099 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367864693446 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253699788584 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15221987315 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109936575053 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74478537451 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429175475687 0.524397521467 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.8591584881 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7083333333 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0217990717 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.625 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7083333333 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.708333333333 0.644075263715 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 45.0783121917 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.21893491124 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423593907642 0.300154397459 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145011367233 0.103427244359 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.131171854181 0.0752933317313 174% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49843431667 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178234976093 0.151897553556 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169732890385 0.114077575197 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12784424313 0.0781384742642 164% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399412658515 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.192335803218 0.067059652881 287% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294303850251 0.210909579961 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127580016184 0.0618886996521 206% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.