Usually, when we are planning for any trip then we select the place which is never seen so far. So basically we do not know that places very well, what we know is, it is amazing and awesome place to see but the same time we need some help to complete the whole journey. For that we need a very good tour guide. That is the reason I am agreeing with above mentioned statements.
Firstly, we can see the lots of places if we are having a tour guide because he will be local person even he would show the places which is not present in the internet. For example, when I went with hill station along with my families that tour guide showed as Berijam lake, most of the traveller misses that place because they believe that only internet sources.
Secondly, tour guides commonly more than five, six languages that will helpful for us while we are entering into the different languages speaking states. For example when we were in Delhi none of us knows that Hindi language but luckily, that tour guide explained us what others saying to us.
Thirdly, keeping a tour guide is cost effective because they know every short route to important side seeing places that makes us more relief from money as well as timing saving. For example, when my family came to Hyderabad, that time arranged a tour guide who knows about historical places in Hyderabad and he took my family all the palaces within estimated time. That is really awesome.
Fourthly, they can solve the problems when it rises because they have local influence. For example, when we were near to the fort my son passed urine it became very big issue but that guy talked the higher authority and solved problem very smoothly without any fine. Because that authority is his uncle in relation to him.
Finally, we can have different kind of atmosphere when we are going with a tour guide. This is something like we are meeting new friends, it gives some kind different feeling whereas if we are going ourselves then it is kind routine life, we won't feel like it as a tour. We feel more bore if we are going alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y good tour guide. That is the reason I am agreeing with above mentioned statements. F...
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...e lots of places if we are having a tour guide because he will be local person ev...
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... family all the palaces within estimated time. That is really awesome. Fourthl...
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...problem very smoothly without any fine. Because that authority is his uncle in relation...
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...es then it is kind routine life, we wont feel like it as a tour. We feel more bor...
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...e feel more bore if we are going alone.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'kind of', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19804400978 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.18337408313 0.158761421928 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0709046454768 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.080684596577 0.046263068375 174% => OK
Pronouns: 0.110024449878 0.0685040099705 161% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.114914425428 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.041564792176 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.17728720098 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0171149144254 0.0309702414327 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0709046454768 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0146699266504 0.0209618222197 70% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0342298288509 0.0139019557991 246% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2088.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 375.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.568 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.272 0.338922669872 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.194666666667 0.251872472559 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133333333333 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0666666666667 0.112833075102 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17728720098 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538666666667 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 59.6961016586 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0588235294 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7612611603 48.84282405 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.823529412 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05882352941 0.644075263715 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 41.5254901961 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 0.947712418301 1.45489161554 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184804110814 0.300154397459 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116220991761 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.091562722996 0.0752933317313 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.59668912889 0.497263757937 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156455727366 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787859197155 0.114077575197 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404282255873 0.0781384742642 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.220907697687 0.336927656856 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0745504635957 0.067059652881 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118819665254 0.210909579961 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427492227816 0.0618886996521 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.