Usually, when we are planning for any trip then we select the place which is never seen so far. So basically we do not know that places very well, what we know is, it is amazing and awesome place to see but the same time we need some help to complete the whole journey.
Firstly, we can see the lots of places if we are having a tour guide because he will be local person even he would show the places which is not present in the internet. For example, when I went with hill station along with my families that tour guide showed as Berijam lake, most of the traveller misses that place because they believe that only internet sources.
Secondly, tour guides commonly more than five, six languages that will helpful for us while we are entering into the different languages speaking states. For example when we were in Delhi none of us knows that Hindi language but luckily, that tour guide explained us what others saying to us.
Thirdly, keeping a tour guide is cost effective because they know every short route to important side seeing places that makes us more relief from money as well as timing saving. For example, when my family came to Hyderabad, that time arranged a tour guide who knows about historical places in Hyderabad and he took my family all the palaces within estimated time. That is really awesome.
Fourthly, they can solve the problems when it rises because they have local influence. For example, when we were near to the fort my son passed urine it became very big issue but that guy talked the higher authority and solved problem very smoothly without any fine. Because that authority is his uncle in relation to him.
Finally, we can have different kind of atmosphere when we are going with a tour guide. This is something like we are meeting new friends, it gives some kind different feeling whereas if we are going ourselves then it is kind routine life, we won't feel like it as a tour. We feel more bore if we are going alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 268, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...problem very smoothly without any fine. Because that authority is his uncle in relation...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'kind of', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198966408269 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.180878552972 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0697674418605 0.0866891130778 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0826873385013 0.046263068375 179% => OK
Pronouns: 0.111111111111 0.0685040099705 162% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116279069767 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0413436692506 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.15507870238 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0180878552972 0.0309702414327 58% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0645994832041 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015503875969 0.0209618222197 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0361757105943 0.0139019557991 260% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1967.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 355.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54084507042 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.27323943662 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.197183098592 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132394366197 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0647887323944 0.112833075102 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15507870238 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 60.4427205532 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6666666667 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0915833454 48.84282405 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.133333333 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.644075263715 186% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 43.3849765258 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 0.951724137931 1.45489161554 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180756550554 0.300154397459 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12667602745 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0944209745306 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.631735382387 0.497263757937 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150816327652 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774515869046 0.114077575197 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041732670799 0.0781384742642 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.205248397826 0.336927656856 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0529596274958 0.067059652881 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115027285331 0.210909579961 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391312201406 0.0618886996521 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.