When it comes to the question of what can we rely on advertisements? Some people believe that companies try to sell more by exaggeration about their merchandise. Others, however, disagree with them. As far as I am concrend, it would be better to consider both sides and then take the decision.
I have an experience that confirms this idea most advertisements provide false information. Many years ago, when I had studied at a foreign university, I have to live out the campus. I rented a small apartment that was near the university because of the high cost of commuting. At that time, I bought a cellphone from online shopping while it was not according to their advertising. As a result, this was not only a great loss but also make me pessimistic toward online markets. all in all, I accept this idea that some companies use advertisements that have misinformation content for increasing their selling. However, we should not expand this mindset about all adverts.
Taking into accounts all factors and accounts involved in the amount of reliance regard on advertising, we conclude that it depends on us to discern the false information. Last but not least, I hope that advertising agencies avoid producing ads based on exaggerating.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Advertisements
...the positive aspect of this phenomenon. advertisements assist us to save our time, money and e...
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Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...c equipment that let me lose my weight. I did not need to do anything unless atta...
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Line 4, column 352, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... on my waist and push the power button. I have been losing about 15 pounds in six...
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Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ot need to pay frequently. Fourth, some of the adverts tell us about new products that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, third, for example, i think, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56829268293 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65606172566 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9094401618 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.3703703704 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1851851852 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59259259259 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0707023466844 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0193762674717 0.076458572812 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0169739137463 0.0737576698707 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0360090087045 0.150856017488 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124770520866 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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