The majority of people who are in their early to mid-twenties think that people who are living in today’s world changing so quickly are less happy with their lives. They advocate that today’s fast-paced world requires them to have a lot of abilities. However, the notion does not reflect the stance that I hold and should be thought about in a different light. I believe that people in the past were less happy with their lives. This is because they could not broaden their perspectives and relieve their stress.
First of all, people who lived in the past were less happy because they were not able to broaden their perspectives. To be specific, living today’s world is happier and satisfied with their lives, which as a result allow people to better understand other cultures, lifestyle, and build a quality life. As modern society is becoming increasingly, globalized today’s world provides people with a strong understanding of international views. People can do this better by easily traveling around the world. To illustrate, Steve Jobs, who is the founder of Apple, made accomplishments in his life time. I read online that he was happy and satisfied because he was global minded and culturally sensitive. He did this by traveling around the world. Therefore, this proves that if people lived in the past, they were less happy or less satisfied with their lives, and they did not broaden their perspectives.
Moreover, people in the past were less happy with their lives because they could not relieve their stress and restore health. In other word, living in today’s world allows people to enjoy a better quality of life which makes better manage stress and maintain health. Stress is the main cause of disease, shorter life span, and dissatisfying life in general. As such, people in modern society should find ways to reduce their stress and stay healthy. For example, when I was elementary school student, I had to go to a library far from my house to collect information for finishing my homework. At that time, it took a lot of time to go there and collect information I want. It was very stressful for me. However, in today’s fast-paced world, I can collect information from the Internet immediately. Through this experience, I learned that people in the past were less happy with their lives because they were not very convenient and get a lot of stress.
I believe that people in the past were less happy with their lives : not broadening their perspectives and relieving stress. All things mentioned, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons I have mentioned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 597, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in general', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208812260536 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.162835249042 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0996168582375 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0613026819923 0.046263068375 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0862068965517 0.0685040099705 126% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11877394636 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0344827586207 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74632732539 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0229885057471 0.0309702414327 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0613026819923 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0114942528736 0.0209618222197 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134099616858 0.0139019557991 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2684.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 449.0 408.028673835 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97772828508 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354120267261 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231625835189 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153674832962 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118040089087 0.112833075102 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74632732539 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436525612472 0.524397521467 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.9825528356 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7083333333 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0814275361 48.84282405 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7083333333 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 41.8709168523 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.16666666667 1.45489161554 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443137865865 0.300154397459 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137143030263 0.103427244359 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.126459304822 0.0752933317313 168% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.434001855682 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133569059511 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163580584824 0.114077575197 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113206037059 0.0781384742642 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.462269511823 0.336927656856 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0883053378383 0.067059652881 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335380760528 0.210909579961 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055712120521 0.0618886996521 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.