Undoubtedly, the issue of governing the critical problems of a community is the most sensitive and complicated one. Although some may think differently, I personally disagree with the idea that the role of young individuals is less significant than older ones. The reasons why I support this opinion is discussed in the following passage.
Firstly, they are more involved in the social positions. In fact, it is not surprising now to see young people in various parts of the community, from academic jobs through trade and commerce. As a consequence, this makes young people well-aware of the critical point of each section compared to old people, which account for the minority of the society. Consequently, they are able to give more practical solutions to improve the community. For example, recent research demonstrates that almost all alterations made in educational systems were recognized and suggested by younger educators rather than old teachers.
Furthermore, young individuals take advantage of their knowledge about novel technologies. Being familiar with different new analyzing and statistical technologies is significantly useful for solving the problems in shorter time periods with less labor. Fortunately, this is what young people can be proud of. For instance, nowadays, skills of working with Internet and different statistical soft-wares are the key requirements for an employer that helps him to efficiently figure out the problems in a process line and find solutions for each one.
Finally, the young know how to form team works. It is certainly true to say that teamwork is a great way to gather people with different levels of experience and knowledge so a system can expect wiser decision making that results from a teamwork. For example, according to statistics, the success of 78% of popular companies is due to the innovative decisions that young members developed in the environment of the teamwork.
Overall, taking into account all these factors, I definitely believe that young people are now more important in making crucial decisions because of their more involvement in society and their awareness of innovative technologies and team works.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236074270557 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.127320954907 0.158761421928 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.135278514589 0.0866891130778 156% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0557029177719 0.046263068375 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0291777188329 0.0685040099705 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143236074271 0.118717715034 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0344827586207 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9956308026 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.026525198939 0.0309702414327 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0026525198939 0.00188951952338 140% => OK
Determiners: 0.0954907161804 0.0887237588012 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0079575596817 0.0209618222197 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0159151193634 0.0139019557991 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2234.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 342.0 408.028673835 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.53216374269 5.86048508987 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406432748538 0.338922669872 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.342105263158 0.251872472559 136% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.269005847953 0.174417080927 154% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.195906432749 0.112833075102 174% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9956308026 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587719298246 0.524397521467 112% => OK
Word variations: 66.9289120262 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 21.375 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5185122036 48.84282405 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.625 120.699889404 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 55.5855263158 45.7405998639 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.95 1.45489161554 134% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337424502793 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0755648691438 0.103427244359 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0571301270058 0.0752933317313 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.560151197603 0.497263757937 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188040496054 0.151897553556 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139575927476 0.114077575197 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561309294594 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.296311341445 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0723829927586 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219840760265 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576364593529 0.0618886996521 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.