TPO 45- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As technology grows, it brings us several changes in our lives that the previous generation, like our parents, cannot even imagine them. When it comes to making decisions, controversy surrounds the issue on whether children are able to decide on their own or not? Most parents have difficulty accepting their youth's dependence and they believe that there are several threats waiting for their youngsters in the society. Meanwhile, I strongly think that parents should give their children a chance to live the real life and decide by their own. To support my notion there are reasons as stated below.
One of the significant aspects of the ongoing discussion which needs to be reflected is that the educational methods have changed completely to make young people more independent relating to their decisions in life. That is to say, young people are prepared to do their own works like selecting their major, cooking, ironing, and lots of other things by themselves. This was impossible in the past because parents did not let their children to do the same things. Take my father's experience for instance, my grandparents wanted my father to select their favorite field of study just because they were farming and they needed an agricultural engineer. However, my father chose a different major and he is now a dentist, the field that he loved the most.
Another noteworthy aspect of the ongoing topic which demands a keen contemplation is that young people are now self-confident relating to their previous generation. This is because of the technology growth which makes their parents aware of their kids’ democracy. In fact, youngsters have more chance to find their answers by just checking the internet without asking their parents. Moreover, parents have less time than they used to allocate to their children, because they allot their utmost attempt to earn more money to facilitate their kids’ life. To illustrated, perhaps a first-hand experience can shed more light on the matter. Thanks to the invention of the computer I solved all my problems when I was in high school by just surfing the net, even if my problems were insignificant because there were several social networking webpages that people helped me instantly.
Paradoxically, being independent does not mean that youngsters can solve all the problems in their life. In fact, it is very difficult to disregard the parental bonding between family members. This means that parents are always have open ears to listen to their children in their hard times to solve and give precious advice. Plus, they are more experienced and can give valuable suggestions in lots of the cases.
In conclusion, just as I mentioned above, young people are able to decide by their own because they are not only well-educated to be independent but also technology helps them to improve their knowledge to solve any problem in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ers. This means that parents are always have open ears to listen to their children i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2427.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08805031447 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69864988741 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51572327044 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.076721184 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276348240695 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887154848621 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654538084382 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172420389999 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482206403329 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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