Since the twentieth century, people’s life has been changed into what scientists call as modern life. In spite of all the advantages of the new lifestyle, it also brings more complexity to individuals, particularly the young who are more involved with it. Therefore, in order to better keep up with the rapid pace of life, personally I agree with the idea that one should have a specific plan. The benefits of being organized is discussed in the following passage.
The first and the foremost reason why I support being organized is that it helps individuals to save more time. Undoubtedly, modern life is strongly associated with a number of responsibilities that a person is dealt with. Although it may seem confusing at first, complications would be smooth by a well-arranged plan. When people have a determined plan, they know how to manage the tasks according to priority and in a particular time period. This, in turn, results in saving more time. A housewife, for example, may accomplish all the house chores in the morning to make the evening free to spend with her children.
Furthermore, having plan is a good way to save money. Unfortunately, the cost of living has been increased recently. However, one could not only avoid wasting the budget, but also would be able to save money using a certain plan on the necessary and unnecessay things. Then, he or she may find the unnecessary things worth emitting from the list and save that much money as the family account. For instance, a university student would find it more beneficial to save money than treating his or her friends for a dinner.
Finally, having fun would be a direct consequence of being organized. Nowadays, many people are complaining of the hectic day-to-day life. Nonetheless, it is likely to meet a few number of people who claim that modern life brings them joy. These lucky people state that being organized makes them save more time and as a result they find some time to enjoy their leisure time. For example, after a busy week, an organized person would make some time free to spend the weekends with his friends playing football or cycling. Interestingly, being organized makes it possible for an individual to have some plan to not only fulfill his or her comitment but also to enjoy his or her life.
Overall, taking into account all these factors, I certainly believe that being organized is necessarily required in order to save time and money and also enjoy each moment of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ividuals who do not know how to prepare an excel sheet or use Microsoft office applicati...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ccomplish these tasks in a much shorter period of time. For instance, cooking was one of the t...
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Line 8, column 454, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...nd enough time to do be involved in two part time jobs. Thus, being organized makes young...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'no doubt', 'as a result', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223157894737 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.170526315789 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122105263158 0.0866891130778 141% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0484210526316 0.046263068375 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0273684210526 0.0685040099705 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117894736842 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0589473684211 0.0351676179071 168% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98452471546 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0463157894737 0.0309702414327 150% => OK
Particles: 0.00210526315789 0.00188951952338 111% => OK
Determiners: 0.101052631579 0.0887237588012 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00421052631579 0.0209618222197 20% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0147368421053 0.0139019557991 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2539.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 430.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90465116279 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309302325581 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220930232558 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167441860465 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132558139535 0.112833075102 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98452471546 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520930232558 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 59.363176089 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4863196879 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.95 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.95 0.644075263715 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 43.5930232558 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.62393162393 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388519365003 0.300154397459 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104102068068 0.103427244359 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0457231195799 0.0752933317313 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.519447107676 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149897060171 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157049134607 0.114077575197 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612895460423 0.0781384742642 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.377087961748 0.336927656856 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.035793902144 0.067059652881 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280727379983 0.210909579961 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591308090566 0.0618886996521 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.