Since the twentieth century, people’s life has been changed to what scientists call as modern life. In spite of all advantages of the new lifestyle, it brings a number of complications in people’s lives, particularly to that of the young individuals. Therefore, in order to keep up with the rapid pace of life, I personally agree with having a specific plan for our daily lives. The benefits of being organized are discussed in the following passage.
The first and the foremost reason why I support having daily plan is that it provides one with an opportunity to save time. When a person prioritizes the daily responsibilities in a to-do list plan, he or she is able to accomplish all of them in a determined period of time. What is resulted from such a faithful plan is to do more in less time rather than making a mess. Therefore, an organized person would definitely expect to fulfill all his or her commitments during the day. A housewife, for example, can easily make an accurate plan to get the whole house chores done in the morning to have enough free time to spend with her children for the rest of the day.
Furthermore, saving money is one of the greatest advantages of being organized. Although it may seem confusing at first, making a plan of necessary and unnecessary issues allows you to be more focused on the essential things to spend money on. Unfortunately, modern life is associated with luxuries such as eating at expensive restaurants or buying costly furniture and clothes. A plan would truly directs individuals to pay money for the thing that it is essential for a routine life. As a result, they find this plan a good guide to not to waste their money.
Finally, being organized is a great way to make life more enjoyable. If people have a particular plan for their life, it is quite likely for them to make some time enough free to spend with their family or develop the fields of their interests. Moreover, having a plan for the whole week reduces the stress of the heavy workload so people are able to enjoy their leisure time with a light mood. For instance, an organized family could obviously make weekends a brilliant chance to have a trip or to go to an amusement park.
Overall, taking into account all these factors, I strongly believe that being organized in the modern life not only helps the young save time and money, but also it brings joy to their lives.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217758985201 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.158562367865 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107822410148 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0380549682875 0.046263068375 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0528541226216 0.0685040099705 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120507399577 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0528541226216 0.0351676179071 150% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70951918097 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0486257928118 0.0309702414327 157% => OK
Particles: 0.00211416490486 0.00188951952338 112% => OK
Determiners: 0.114164904863 0.0887237588012 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0105708245243 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00845665961945 0.0139019557991 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2466.0 2387.08602151 103% => OK
No of words: 426.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78873239437 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298122065728 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.194835680751 0.251872472559 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164319248826 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115023474178 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70951918097 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 59.2173979716 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4210526316 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9110345071 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.789473684 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.644075263715 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 41.9046207067 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.56779661017 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441699022964 0.300154397459 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0984926130659 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0591881438015 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554556150325 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156944970503 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17751693325 0.114077575197 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550047366586 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.337302433379 0.336927656856 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0789726287641 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28537580779 0.210909579961 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063640478384 0.0618886996521 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.