TPO #4
Independent Toefl task
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in the street than there are today.
As a person living in 2017, I would have to say that I disagree. There are many reasons for this, some geological, some political and I shall try to explain somme of the reasons here.
Statistics show that population of almost all countries are growing, in many it is even advertiesd to have children to secure the future of the country. Roughly speaking, more people means more vehicles.
However, it's for sure that the usage of public transportation will be increased, mainly in developed countries that undrestand that this century is the fall of fuel fossiis and the time to face some real enviormental problems.
I think in twenty years, in developed countries price of having a car will be immensely increased. and therefore most people will try to use public transportation instead of their personal vehicles. this reuces the usage of cars, but will not enough because some countries are not as enthusiastic about world problems as Europe or United States. The rest of the world, less developed countries in Asia and South America and Africa, the requied regulations for this century will not be placed and the number of cars will increase overall. This means more enviormental problems in the future.
As an example, in America, most car production companies have moved toward an electric future. But in Asia or Africa, still Internal combustion engine cars are being sold without any alternative.
I believe, the only solution is to work together. Because solving problems in one part of the world will not solve the problem it self. In many other cases this will eventually cause imigration. Reduction of cars, is like any other world problem and needs to be tackled together. So this issue needs to be addressed at international gatherings and proper laws should be set for car companies and public transportation globaly, in order to reduce cars and the health hazards that it brings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Statistics show that population of almost all countries are growing, in man...
^^
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ving a car will be immensely increased. and therefore most people will try to use p...
^^^
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ion instead of their personal vehicles. this reuces the usage of cars, but will not ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s the usage of cars, but will not enough because some countries are not as enthus...
^^
Line 11, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the only solution is to work together. Because solving problems in one part of the wor...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 128, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...of the world will not solve the problem it self. In many other cases this will eventual...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, therefore, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01886792453 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73642732268 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531446540881 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5161161531 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8823529412 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152318004186 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491953722368 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531363239193 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069938628274 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578448867508 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.