TPO41
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, education has offten played a promient role in all human societies. Dou to its paramount role , teacheres have been considered as a valubale group in every society. But some people hold a view that nowadays instructures are not appreciated by others in contrast to the past. Howevere some other take an opposite veiw and believe that teachers now are more valued that before. I personally agree with the former view. In the following paragraphs, I will collaborate on my perspective.
The first significant reason to be mentioned is that there are a varietey of educational facillities today. Advance technology like Interent obviously provides a huge information and everybody easilly can access to them. I can remember when I was a child, I had a lot of questions about creation of world , different infectious diseases , solar system and so on. I could just ask my questions form my teachers in the school, my parents , or books borrowing form small libraray next to my builing huses. Now every student in the school eassily can access to Interent and search every information in the scientific websites. Some of these website like wikipeida have a better knowledge than current teachers in the school and beleive me even professors in the universites. As a result the students know their teacher always are not the best reference of information.
Another equally important reason is that computer and communication technology provide some interesting careers that cause a huge income for people. According to recent servey conducted by Harvard university, most increased income jobs are depended to computer studies such as prgramming, analyzing data and computer engineearing. These increase salary changed the prespective of people about traditional works such as teaching in the schools or even higher educationas system, universites. Today parents advice their children to choose study fileds related to increased inocome jobs such as computer engineearing.
All in all, teachers are one of the most important part of every human society. But in my view they have less values than the past duo to advanced technology. Every one easily can access to information and like jobs with a higher income.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...man societies. Dou to its paramount role , teacheres have been considered as a val...
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Suggestion: ,
...rm my teachers in the school, my parents , or books borrowing form small libraray ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this website' or 'these websites'?
Suggestion: this website; these websites
...ion in the scientific websites. Some of these website like wikipeida have a better knowledge ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... me even professors in the universites. As a result the students know their teache...
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...vide some interesting careers that cause a huge income for people. According to r...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to study'
Suggestion: to study
...parents advice their children to choose study fileds related to increased inocome job...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun values is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...human society. But in my view they have less values than the past duo to advanced te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, in contrast, such as, as a result, in contrast to, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22841225627 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93893820969 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590529247911 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8657275132 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.85 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.95 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104824399075 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338885745332 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368998868002 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06948265061 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451887520752 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.