Today, people are struggling with the stress of working too long, catch up the deadlines and more importantly to keep up with their life. Since they have to spare more time to earn money and keep their life standards stabile, they do not have enough free time for themselves and their loved ones. However, as we all know technology has been improving and every single day many scientist or researchers find a solution for a problem. Shortly, there are many solutions for many thing and it is increasing in time. Personally, I believe that these advantages and innovations makes and will make life easier for humanity. Therefore, I agree that twenty years from now people will have more leisure time.
First point of my idea is based on transportation. Maybe most of us don't even aware of the fact that we did not have the well designed transportation vehicles and paths a while ago. Thankfully, in time many civilized society have built up many important railways, roads and very fast trains, cars, busses for public transportation. Furthermore, now it is so simple to go to any country on any continent, it doesn't matter how far away they are. Because, there are planes everywhere and countless airway firms. Another important connection way is to use ships and many firm use them to ship many product to the consumers. These amazing vehicles and opportunities provided us to not to waste our time and energy to go to work, to visit people or else. As far as I see, it is keep getting improves so that it will creates more free time for us.
Secondly, as we all know, communication with everyone all around the world is the easiest thing even children knows how to do it. In past, it was a very difficult task to send a message to a place or someone but now we are able to to it by phones, mails, texts. This is a revolution in my opinion cause it has opened a way to work from home. Home office provide a cozy, safe and cheap working environment and also it creates a grate time to work with our family. As we see from the news, TV or hear from the right sources, all of these communication devices, softwares and websites are getting better day by day. That gives me hope for a more relaxed future life.
Thirdly, the changing education system and professions will lead the future jobs to work less and more efficiently. A well known saying emphasizes that time is money so efficient work result in a fast completed tasks which bring success. These days, many schools, collages, universities are based on quick solutions for various areas such as chemistry, medicine, architecture, computer science, economy and so on. With the developed techniques, analyzing methods, formulas and agreements, we can conclude to the end quickly. Moreover we can guess on topics or make futuristic assumptions. The value of those, in other words the worth of those techniques that we do not have to wait for a long time so that we can have our leisure time. With the help of determined researchers, scientists and professors, we will have a more qualified and longer spare time.
As a conclusion, developing technology and accumulating informations will provide us a more leisure time after twenty years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun scientist seems to be countable; consider using: 'many scientists'.
Suggestion: many scientists
...has been improving and every single day many scientist or researchers find a solution for a pr...
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Line 1, column 472, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
.... Shortly, there are many solutions for many thing and it is increasing in time. Personall...
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Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sed on transportation. Maybe most of us dont even aware of the fact that we did not ...
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Line 2, column 407, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... go to any country on any continent, it doesnt matter how far away they are. Because, ...
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Line 2, column 589, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun product seems to be countable; consider using: 'many products'.
Suggestion: many products
...se ships and many firm use them to ship many product to the consumers. These amazing vehicle...
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Line 2, column 810, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...s keep getting improves so that it will creates more free time for us. Secondly, as we...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...thing even children knows how to do it. In past, it was a very difficult task to send a...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... a place or someone but now we are able to to it by phones, mails, texts. This is a r...
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Line 4, column 525, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ts, we can conclude to the end quickly. Moreover we can guess on topics or make futurist...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2638.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 557.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73608617594 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7420088383 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526032315978 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 848.7 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0736357815 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8928571429 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.67857142857 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321917049099 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825908304764 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129291187003 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188395308018 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822221103285 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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