in twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than they are today?
Since the begining of the current century, number of cars have changed drastically. Some people believe that after twenty years number of cars will decline because people will use bikes instead of cars; However, there is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubts on this belief. From a personal perspective in twenty years, people will be more dependent on their cars, so number of cars will increase given that human's population will increase, commute time will be longer, and cars will be more technologically advanced. Below I will strive to explain my supporting points in more details.
The first and foremost point, although big cities have various job opportunities, the cost of living in these cities is very high. A vivid example that could be given to shed light on that is San Francisco city has many occupations; however the housecosting is incredible. Thus , people prefer to live in city that more affordable for them and drive to their work. Furthermore, this problem is seemed to enlarge in the near future, which makes peolple use their cars more often. Consequently, number of cars will increase.
Next, couple with longer commute time, human population is another reason why cars will be in constantly increase. To put it in another word, increasing the number of population will accaompany with a growth in cars usage. A survey conducted by Oxford University found that in 2050 numbre of vehicles will on roads will be three billion cars up from one billion now. In addition to that people in developed countries are accustomed to using their cars; so the rate of cars on the road will increase. Therefore, number of cars will increase as fast as its human population.
Ultimately, technologically advanced cars is another subtable point that should be born in mind. in the last decade, cars have improved dramatically, which encourages people to have cars. For instance, the hybrid cars, which is not only environmentaly-friendly, but also cost-effective. Moreover, cars today are more comfortable and faster. Provided that car's companies continue to have more car innovation, people will use cars more in the future. As a result, cars' features will make people more denpendency on their cars.
Taking everything into consideration;without a doubt, number of cars on the road will increase in twenty years. It is suggested that governments put stricter rule to ensure the safety of roads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12878787879 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99814356712 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4421808423 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3181818182 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342638769915 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110344245792 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824631623065 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207663258694 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749844484153 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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