Universities should spend more money in buying facilities than hiring famous professors.
At the turn of the new century, with the development human’s modern society, no one can turn a blind eye to the enormous direct and indirect effects of education on societies blooming and thriving. Actually, a simple recognition of this argument lends our discussion to questions of how students can attain comprehensive knowledge in a prestigious university. Although some people adhere to this belief that universities can improve their ranking by purchasing amenities, in my vantage point, hiring prominent professors leaves profound impacts on the level of literacy of students and the university’s rank since professors can inspire positive incentive to students, and also attract more ingenious students.
The first aspect to point out is that what provokes a university to hire a well-known professor is improving generous incentives to students. It goes without saying that in the competitive world of today, having a powerful motivation is a requirement for students to enhance their knowledge as well as make headway. Without a shadow of a doubt, a professional professor can make a creative inspiration to students. Not only can he teach valuable information, but also he answers all students’ questions patiently. Take a case of a university that provides a lot of extensive facilities for instance; however, if it does not have a skilled professor to teach students how they can use them, it cannot be a top university. Consequently, a prominent professor can make the biggest contribution to a society blooming because he can teach to students how they should struggle for their dreams and work hard without any negative energy. Actually, a university without professional doctors neither enhances the level of knowledge in students nor has a high-rank between other ones. As a result, a skilled professor has pivotal roles in improving a university and its students.
The further subtle point is that attracting ingenious students can be considered another advantage of being prominent professors in a university. It is absolutely undeniable that nowadays with the development of human’s modern society, more and more students tend to experience education abroad. As a matter of fact, according to a recent statistic in my country, every year several students immigrate to developed countries for continuing their studies. Without any doubt, being famous professors has profound impacts on assimilating smart students, all over the world. To illustrate more, in high-rank universities, there are several professors who can tempt smart students to make considerable efforts for being accepted by these universities. That is why they can work with these professors and improve their knowledge. As a consequence, attracting smart students is a remarkable benefit of being well-known professors in a university.
To put everything in a nutshell, a broad look at the main points and discussions reveals the fact that we are living in an age in which education has a pivotal role as far as a development of a nation is concerned. It is crystal-clear that professional professors in universities have considerable impacts on students’ knowledge and universities’ rank because of improving students’ inspiration and attracting smart ones. It is high time we stopped overlooking the fact that just a university with excellent amenities can be prestigious. Have you ever seen an elite university without famous professors? I absolutely believe no!
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246732026144 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.148692810458 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0980392156863 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0375816993464 0.046263068375 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0424836601307 0.0685040099705 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117647058824 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0457516339869 0.0351676179071 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.33828592982 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0294117647059 0.0309702414327 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0016339869281 0.00188951952338 86% => OK
Determiners: 0.109477124183 0.0887237588012 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245098039216 0.0209618222197 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147058823529 0.0139019557991 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3490.0 2387.08602151 146% => OK
No of words: 540.0 408.028673835 132% => OK
Chars per words: 6.46296296296 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.431481481481 0.338922669872 127% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.375925925926 0.251872472559 149% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.3 0.174417080927 172% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.227777777778 0.112833075102 202% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.33828592982 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477777777778 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.6799763717 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4782608696 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4429200571 48.84282405 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.739130435 120.699889404 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4782608696 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.608695652174 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 61.0708534622 45.7405998639 134% => OK
Elegance: 1.79285714286 1.45489161554 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119800138993 0.300154397459 40% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0895998595161 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0479617873789 0.0752933317313 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.456073999496 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138210764507 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047546273469 0.114077575197 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425254778159 0.0781384742642 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.437789120349 0.336927656856 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0189873501263 0.067059652881 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945814059341 0.210909579961 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419658099114 0.0618886996521 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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