University has 2 programs for students in break time between 2 semesters.
Which one do you prefer?
1) Taking some courses or classes which have no connection with your major,
2) Take work project (working in city, or in school to teach children to overcome/do their homework.
The 20 and 21st century are characterized by all momentous changes they have made in our lives, the most important milestone of this century is university, it is worth nothing that universities plans has a great impact on its students. One of the questions which is often raised regarding this issue is "who should universities plan for the break time between 2 semesters?’. Some people are inclined toward the idea that universities should hold some extra classes unrelated to the student's major, on the contrary, others believe that students should look for experiences out of the campus, for instance having a work project. From my vantage point, the latter view should be regarded as universities priority between two semester. The following reasons will aptly elucidate my perspective.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that one of the main concerns of every student during his study is finding a well-paid job after graduation. A work project can help people to gain experiences related to their majors; besides, these experiences will help them to find a proper job. On the other hand, one of the crucial requisites of companies is having work experiences; hence, people can use their work experience to elevate their chances for finding a proper job. According to a survey conducted by CIWI (Canadian International Work Institute), the chances of finding a job for the people who had a brief work experience in a related work would highly increases
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Furthermore; Work project can be start of an indipendency; to put it in another way, individuals can earn a brief money, so they do not need their parents' economic support. It is an undeniable fact that if a person gains something by effort and hardwork, he will understand its real value, therefore, he will probably have a strict plan for spending that money, take my personal experience as an example, Last summer I had a job at a company for my internship, before that time I was supported by my family financially but after that I became nearly independent from my family and I was very jubilant about this accomplishment in my life.
Finally; having a job will boost self-confidence, likewise it will help the person to build up a rapport with others, this will contribute to a more sociable and gregarious person. My friend is a great example, she was depressed for a long time and her scores were terrible and she does not believe in her abilities, but after working in a company for only 2 months all of her depression signs was totally annihilated and an astonishing progress was vivid in her GPA.
In Conclusion; all the aforementioned paragraphs are superb results of a work project job. Experiencing a job related to the courses and major of every student is a precious opportunity that benefits not only to the students but also to the university and society. This shows that university policies can affect its students directly and provide big job opportunities for them in the future. In fact, there are a myriad of other reasons, supporting the above statement, which could be mentioned but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2616.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94517958412 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94634346882 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51606805293 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.7155443206 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.882352941 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1176470588 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241463295959 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783921090672 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525918790536 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129944141692 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546807987905 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes. We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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