What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
How many children do you have? Nowadays, a child has many good characters. But what are the important qualities of a good boy or a good girl? In my point of view, I strongly think that a few important characters a good child should have are: obedience, loyalty, and respect.
Firstly, a good boy or a good girl needs to be obedient to his or her parent. Children should obey their parents because they experienced many things throughout their lives, thus, they have a better understanding of what life is about. Parents often give us better advice. There is no parent who'd want their kid to do bad things. They only want the best thing for their children. So children should listen to their advice and follow that advice in order to be good.
Secondly, an equally important quality is loyalty. a good kid must take care of his or her parent when they grow up. As children continue to grow up, their parents get older and older. As they get older, this might mean they can no longer support their child financially and they are more prone to serious diseases. Therefore, children should take care of their parents carefully. In addition, I think children should live with their parents to protect and look after them.
Last but not least, respect is the necessary character of a good child. Since it was our parents that brought us into this world, we should show our respects towards them. They provide us food and clothes and send us to school to study. Our parents have always taken care of us ever since we were little. Besides, they always bring us what they think is the best for us. For example, my parents would not spend much money on their friends because they would rather save that money for me. Whenever I need anything for school, my parents would always buy them for me. This is why good children must always respect their parents.
In conclusion, I believe that obedience, respect, and loyalty are the essential characters of a good boy or a good girl.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198492462312 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.140703517588 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0904522613065 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0603015075377 0.046263068375 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.130653266332 0.0685040099705 191% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0829145728643 0.118717715034 70% => OK
Participles: 0.00251256281407 0.0351676179071 7% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.32560642585 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0251256281407 0.0309702414327 81% => OK
Particles: 0.00251256281407 0.00188951952338 133% => OK
Determiners: 0.0603015075377 0.0887237588012 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0326633165829 0.0209618222197 156% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0201005025126 0.0139019557991 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1972.0 2387.08602151 83% => OK
No of words: 352.0 408.028673835 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60227272727 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298295454545 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213068181818 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127840909091 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0681818181818 0.112833075102 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32560642585 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.1439846237 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.08 20.5533526081 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.555512989 48.84282405 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.88 120.699889404 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.08 20.5533526081 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 35.3868181818 45.7405998639 77% => OK
Elegance: 0.856060606061 1.45489161554 59% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212989615263 0.300154397459 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111287642637 0.103427244359 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0969735410693 0.0752933317313 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.444764199912 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161532625505 0.151897553556 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742685716339 0.114077575197 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807638103963 0.0781384742642 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.236639574958 0.336927656856 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10107172073 0.067059652881 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164979902467 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722376635273 0.0618886996521 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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