The topic asked what crucial skill for a person ought to learn so as to be successful in today’s world. Certainly, some people if asked would express that language while others would mention that question depends on a great deal of factors, for instance, someone may hold view that physic compared to the language. As far as I am concerned, I adopt a firm position that language is a must.
The first reason coming to mind substantiating my stand point is concerned with this issue that language provides greater and better job salary, job opportunities as well as brighter future. It is fundamental of our background which may help us to chase our higher dream of life in many respects. In today’s world, unless you have second language such as particularly an English skill, not much chance to be hired, at least by a reputable company with high salary. The best example that fit this notion is my cousin experience. In the past, he did not opt for a university, where he was going to study linguistic. Basically, under these circumstances, no way to obtain much, so he had to live on very tight budget. Consequently, he was full of regret pertaining to his decision which led him to be in this situation. It goes without saying that, not being evaluated even as candidate for job interview due to lack of English skill shows that how vital it is for ourselves.
Another momentous reason which deserves some word here is that salary. It is important to consider that working people are paid according to their capabilities which are consisted of our skills, wisdom and backgrounds. With the help of valuable skills, we may earn much more income than others who cannot due to deficiency in skills. A vivid example can be given to shed light on subject is my own experience. Since I am able to speak three languages at my company, I am the only one who get the highest salary among my counterpart at my department as well as company. Furthermore, a noteworthy interesting social research conducted in my country shows that vast number of firms prefer employees who at least speak a second language, and English is first on the list. Without a shadow of doubt, language plays such an important role in both working life as well as future life.
Having considered all the aforementioned grounds discussed above, I am of the opinion that language is a huge asset for individuals who follow the right path toward bright future. One of the most critical factor in order for employer to hire a worker is a language.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ucial skill for a person ought to learn so as to be successful in today's world. Ce...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun respect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many respects'.
Suggestion: many respects
...us to chase our higher dream of life in many respect. In today's world, unless you have...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'opt'
Suggestion: opt
...sin experience. In the past, he did not opted for a university, where he was going to...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...g to study linguistic. Basically, under this circumstances, no way to obtain much, s...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
...cording to their capabilities which are consist of our skills, wisdom and backgrounds. ...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the highest'.
Suggestion: get the highest
...es at my company, I am the only one who get highest salary among my counterpart at my depar...
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Line 5, column 849, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... an important role both in working life as well as future life. Having considered all t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, while, as to, at least, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75570776256 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76374648911 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582191780822 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.755081685 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.15 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148131278625 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436103824942 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703260983225 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848791309459 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429096051425 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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