What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work for you? Use specific details to support your response.
Different people have their own approach to problem-solving. In my opinion, the best method to solve problems is teamwork since teamwork provides people with many advantages. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, doing teamwork to solve problems enables people to have gather more minds and therefore will be more effective. When people discuss with each other to find a solution, they are presented with more ideas and options for their choices. In addition, they are able to take an in-depth look at the problem with different perspectives. For example, almost every school nowadays often requires students to do group projects. They want students to show their point of view and discuss with other students in the group. As a result, whenever the students project come to a standstill, if one member of a group couldn’t think of the solution, other members may come up with a breakthrough. On the other hand, if the students didn’t work together, they would probably be stuck forever and they would never solve the problem successfully.
Furthermore, when people working with others, they will be shown their mistake if they make one. People hardly realize their mistakes every time they work on their own. This may lead to a chain reaction and unable people to solve problems. Consequently, we usually need another one’s perspective to point out the mistake or misconception that we’ve made. My own experience is a good example to illustrate this. In the last semester, I and my classmates were required to make a group presentation on the subject of Vietnamese literature of 18th century. I was voted as the group leader so I was quite egocentric. I insisted on doing a presentation about “Truyen Kieu”, which is, in fact, a 19th century work. But I didn’t remember about that. Even though other members of the group reminded me but I didn’t listen to them since I had put lots of effort to collect information about “Truyen Kieu”. Because I was the group leader, everyone in my group had no choice but to listen to me. As a result, our presentation got the lowest grade in the class because our subject didn’t belong to the 18th century category. In hindsight, I should have listened to my teammate and take their opinions into consideration.
In conclusion, I truly believe that teamwork is the best way to solve problems. This is because with more people, there are more minds and therefore it would be more effective. Moreover, people don’t often realize the mistakes they made until somebody points out for them.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231083844581 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.157464212679 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0715746421268 0.0866891130778 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0429447852761 0.046263068375 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0838445807771 0.0685040099705 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112474437628 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0265848670757 0.0351676179071 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74478870176 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0449897750511 0.0309702414327 145% => OK
Particles: 0.00613496932515 0.00188951952338 325% => OK
Determiners: 0.0858895705521 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0184049079755 0.0209618222197 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102249488753 0.0139019557991 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2641.0 2387.08602151 111% => OK
No of words: 439.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0159453303 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337129840547 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27562642369 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193621867882 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100227790433 0.112833075102 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74478870176 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503416856492 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.928258052 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8846153846 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5847098132 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.576923077 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8846153846 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.730769230769 0.644075263715 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 44.4472577536 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.30215827338 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18744066403 0.300154397459 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103592186743 0.103427244359 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0850268930759 0.0752933317313 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.407544581457 0.497263757937 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131748328687 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071129009557 0.114077575197 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481877941213 0.0781384742642 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333949261671 0.336927656856 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0894956197696 0.067059652881 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137338717422 0.210909579961 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182702553416 0.0618886996521 30% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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