When famous people such as actors, athletes, and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
celebrities were a public figure,to whom a lot of people may idolized in their life. Directly or indirectly, their impact may seems visible in the public. Some people may hold a view that people should not care about star's view as it is not necessarily brings a good change to society. however, I strongly believe that celebrities' message is much crucial in today's universe. what I follow, I will cogently express my most conspicuous point to prove my view.
To begin with, many popular celebrities work with social organisation to explain a important social issue. through a star people, the social message can pierce to the mind of the people who refuse to give any sake to other's social message.To be more specific, it is very useful approach to the younger people who support their ideal with great zeal. furthermore, important social issue can be heard by most of the young people and in ideal case, people also adopt it. To relate this context, I want to share my personal example. during my earlier teenage year, hardly, I listened a social campaign and its associated message. I often dismissed this program without knowing its key reason. By neglecting completely this salubrious message, I were oblivion with social issue. however, the situation got changed once I heard this message about "no to drugs" by my favorite star 'Adam Levine'. I had spent entire one hour about a drugs negative consequences and how young people may lure to use it. After this, my whole perspective had changed about drug use. Thus, star may do or reach where alone message cannot reach with beneficial aspects.
furthermore, this celebrities may motivate people through their experience of their life. Nowadays, people only follow, hear and adopt what a successful people said. By elucidating their hardship during their struggling period and how they impeccable at their decision, people will learn to dogged their dream even with a spate of failure. On the other words, celebrities push the feelings of the people to do hard work. Plus, people know a clear path that success is behind a failure and do not frustrate with their life. By this way, celebrities mat promulgate positive attitude in the society.
To wrap up, contemplating aforementioned views, once can realize hearing opinion of the public celebrities. they may help to spread good message as well as bring impetus in people's mind not to afraid with failure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03712871287 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6475801071 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556930693069 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.766663084 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7916666667 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199077269612 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057082282721 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473153355943 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11871721641 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449683291958 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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