“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has
nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the
quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your
position.
Luck vs. Hard work
Some people say that people succeed because of their hard work, whereas some others argue that luck plays an important role in determining success. Although sometimes people succeed because of luck, it’s generally diligence, perseverance and determination that determine a person’s success. Hence, I strongly believe that people succeed because of their hard work.
First, I can daresay that hard work makes people succeed because I’ve seen it. My father, son of a farmer of a small village was sent to school along with his siblings and cousins. They had to walk around 5km from their home to the school and another 5km on the way back to home. After they returned to their home, sometimes they even had to go to work in the fields. As it used to be strenuous, no one was able to concentrate much on their studies, except for my father. He studied hard and got a job in a city. Although, his siblings and cousins went to the same school as he did, none of them studied as my father did and hence, they had to stay back at the village. Only his hard work got a job in a city. He never stopped working hard even after getting a job. He started from a few 1000 bucks and now we own a car, a big independent house with almost every possible appliance and some other assets as well. Every day he works hard and I witness his success every day. Hence, I strongly believe that hard work makes people succeed.
Secondly, I also believe that luck is nothing but an opportunity. People might get lucky now and then. But, only people who use those lucky opportunities and work hard would succeed. Considering me as an example, I’m lucky to have such a wonderful father. As his son, I have the privilege of going to a good school. Now, if I succeed because of studying in that good school, people might say that I was lucky to have a father who could afford that school. I don’t demur that I’m lucky, but just going to a good school wouldn’t make me successful. I must use that opportunity and study hard, only then I would succeed. Hence, again its hard work that makes people successful.
Thus, in my opinion, its hard work, not luck, that plays an important role in determining a person’s success.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'whereas', 'except for', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197125256674 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.149897330595 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0698151950719 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0616016427105 0.046263068375 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0944558521561 0.0685040099705 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.102669404517 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0205338809035 0.0351676179071 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53148441173 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0308008213552 0.0309702414327 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0780287474333 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143737166324 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102669404517 0.0139019557991 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2256.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 403.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59801488834 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.285359801489 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213399503722 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.129032258065 0.174417080927 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0769230769231 0.112833075102 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53148441173 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478908188586 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.8209542694 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.12 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8185139846 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.24 120.699889404 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.12 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.56 0.644075263715 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 37.4599503722 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.04697986577 1.45489161554 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327427212542 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144325924795 0.103427244359 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.109718727244 0.0752933317313 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.432321555017 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188370577098 0.151897553556 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11236049542 0.114077575197 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535736254611 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.246720959205 0.336927656856 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0586906317923 0.067059652881 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21080157064 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575533607906 0.0618886996521 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.