Which of the following is better to be done alone rather than in a group:
a. studying
b.shopping
c. doing business
Undoubtedly, in our modern scientific life in which time and accuracy are greater than gold in terms of value working in groups is highly recommended, which leads to more achievements. However, sometimes people are required to do some activities alone. These people will have different activities for performing alone, and have their own reasoning. If I be in a situation in which I should do several activities like studying, shopping, and doing business, I prefer to go shopping alone. My opinion is based on quite a few reasons, three conspicuous ones of which have been elaborated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, shopping alone can save time and energy. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that purchasing is time-consuming process in which one should visit several shops and stores to find his or her favorite goods, and in cities are replete in many malls where hundreds of stores in which several brands are sold. This process can become more slowly if people go shopping in groups. In contrast, Not only does studying in groups save time, but it may accelerate the learning since people can learn several ideas and concepts form each other rather than spend time to read them in papers and materials.
Additionally, shopping alone is more useful in comparison with do it in a group. Indeed, one of the main reason of usefulness in working in groups is taking advantages of others’ opinions and experiences, and when people buy their needs, they often do not need others’ help. To elaborate more, lets consider one of our everyday experience—buying clothes—in which all of us have different point of view about an appropriate dressing based on our characteristics, culture, education, age, and religious beliefs, to name but a few, and in this situations we do not really others’ views because of the nature and acceptable differences. Nevertheless, such activities as doing business depend on considering all aspects of every decisions which can be obtained by working groups and hear all members’ perspective. By doing so, it is more probable for a businessman to reach profit.
Eventually, go shopping in groups, unlike studying and doing business, can cause negative feelings. In fact, when members of a group going shopping together try put their priorities first, and ignore others, which cause conflicts among group members. In addition, every member feels will be upset and anxious since his or her privacy will be interrupted. At the same time, in doing business and studying in groups, it is less likely for members to have confliction with each other because they have same goals and interests which pave the way to avoid promoting tension. Accordingly, individuals can avoid such negative emotions by purchasing alone.
To sum up, I have a penchant for shopping alone on the grounds that it is time efficient, useful, and brings better feelings. Therefore, who can ignore the aforementioned advantages of shopping alone and do it in groups.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, in addition, in contrast, in fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2523.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18069815195 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01553307047 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525667351129 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4282895708 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1904761905 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247633479439 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739213486489 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482140778006 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136523669948 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324356503703 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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