Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the beginning of time, humans have taken part in sports. These sports varied vastly and have been changing ever since. Many people like participating in sports that require skills, patience and calculated timing and positions, such as archery and cricket. Then we have sports that are dangerous and reckless, such as rugby and bull riding. Although there is the obvious risk of serious injuries and deaths in these sports, people still opt to play them.
In my opinion, people take part in such sports in order to prove their bravery. Being able to play and survive the game such as bull riding is seen as a medal of honor and admired by their friends and family members.
Places where dangerous sport is widespread, such as bull fighting in countries like Spain and Portugal, it is not only acceptable for people to be interested in such sports, in fact it is also encouraged. People either participate or cheer on others as they compete in such sports. Being opposed to the idea of such sports in such countries may be seen as being cowardly or weak.
Another reason why people are attracted to dangerous sports despite the risks is that it can be thrilling. People who like are risk-takers and like to live in the moment particularly enjoy such sports. These are usually young people who are carefree and do not have responsibilities such as supporting families etc. They have no one to worry about but themselves and so they do not mind taking such risks.
To sum up, I believe the reason why people are attracted to dangerous sports is due the thrill they provide as well as proving that they are bold enough to attempt such sports. Other reasons for this interest could be because it is encouraged in one's culture or because they are carefree and enjoy doing things that are out of the ordinary.
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Suggestion: at the moment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, still, then, well, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74447949527 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45083003961 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523659305994 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1990652099 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198632927093 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779288014444 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727414542692 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123700549324 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058779350424 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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