why go to university?
I strongly believed that everyone should attend university because nowadays definition of qualified person has changed and it depends on graduated person. Several reasons will be examined below from my viewpoint.
First, the main reason is diploma and degree that will be supplied by university which will step you into world opportunities and open new horizons to the world. You will accept invitations from well paid and popular places to be specialist there. To have such invitations will increase your volition to continue to learn and to build your own future career. Without this diploma, you will be unable to fulfill your dreams and relish your life. Every day we see people around us who try to earn money with cleaning streets or otherwise driving the car for 12 hours for money. How do you think, are they fulfill their dreams or enjoy from their life. Believe me, they don’t. Because they don’t have enough money for that, because of 1 thin paper which could change their life.
Another important reason can be for higher education. In our daily life, we acquainted with tens or hundreds of people who have studied in university just for future career options, or they have to study because of their were no any other opportunity. However, don’t oversee people who just lust for knowledge and they want to develop themselves. Sometimes this reason makes people attend university. Who crave for knowledge understand that university education helps us widen our understanding and increase our intellectual ability.
Apart from that point education at the university will provide you a chance to travel other countries to develop yourself and evolve your education level. Mostly university, itself create this setting for the well educated student. They send this student to have his/her Master in other country and return back as a professional. While this time you have more chance to travel this country and to know their culture, cuisine and integrate with people, forge a friendship.
Finally, university life will make you be familiar with life rules. You will immigrate to the city, that you know no one there. You will be far from your home, your family which leads to some liability. First times may be you will feel exhausted and miss your mom’s cooking and your father who never let you cope with some difficult problems. In a word, you will encounter with rocky moments but you will not fall down, on the contrary, you will gain experience and be ready for life. Nevertheless, you can change this disadvantage to your advantage. You will be free and independent. You will have your own decisions and your own rules how to go out and when to return.
In conclusion, you university will help you to harvest knowledge, to have the better life and be ready for life. I think these reasons are enough to answer question “Why go to university?”
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, apart from, i think, in conclusion, you know, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2424.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01863354037 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60460259266 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532091097308 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2817240098 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5862068966 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6551724138 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.51724137931 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103422943264 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327224911172 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705544755967 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846729448752 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951602844442 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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