You will need to accomplish an assignment to do a presentation. Which will you choose?
1. Act out a scene from a play(with a partner)
2. Explain your review of a novel you recently you read
3. Read a selection of poem
Doing presentation can be seen a precious opportunity to interact with students and teachers. There is no doubt that we are supposed to show our best sides. Evaluating three types of assignments, I am in favor of acting out a scene from a play with partners for its benefits to members in a team, audience as well as myself.
Preparing a fantastic show adds interests in the long busy term. As students, we struggle to achieve better academic performance and higher grade point average. From time to time, we may get frustrated because of uncertainties like bad health condition or failure relationship with others which definitely influence individual mood and learning condition. A adaptation from a literature work provides us with relaxing situation to relieve our stress. Rehearsal we are practicing will immerse ourselves into another world which is beneficial to one's mental health. From this perspective, I am looking forward to enacting a role in the play.
Apart from personal gain, relationship between members in the same group get enhanced. It is safe to say perception from one to another derives a lot from staying with each other during a condense period of time. This assignment may well a good chance for us to make more friends even build more intimate connection. Try to imagine several scenes when we hold the same umbrella shouldering a torrential rain, or cuddle each other because of the needs of plots as well as discuss different opinions about characters. These are absolutely perfect lubricants among us. Because of this unforgettable experience, future days are bound to be happier whatever happens.
Admittedly, explaining our perspective from a novel or reading a part of poem seem to offer enough rest or leave a good expression in the hectic life. Presenting our views according to a novel actually acquires total understanding of meanings behind words and though originated from author. This is likely to be such a boring work that traps us in the countless consideration. As for reading a selection, if we are not professional readers, it is hard to create an atmosphere no matter for oneself or audience siting aside. To be honest, reading alone in front of students can be an extremely disaster without the help of professional trainers if we want to truly perform well.
In determining the choices among these three activities, there is no denying that all of them have their own benefits. However, life should be filled with joy and friendship considering aspects of a student's life. Acting a role can be that ideal option to enjoy ourselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to condition'
Suggestion: to condition
... influence individual mood and learning condition. A adaptation from a literature work pr...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...individual mood and learning condition. A adaptation from a literature work provi...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lot from staying with each other during a condense period of time. This assignment may wel...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...aying with each other during a condense period of time. This assignment may well a good chance...
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Line 7, column 581, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('extremely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('disaster') instead of another adjective.
...ading alone in front of students can be an extremely disaster without the help of professional traine...
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Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...and friendship considering aspects of a students life. Acting a role can be that ideal o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, may, so, well, apart from, as for, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05128205128 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91925634109 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610722610723 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8985096396 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2173913043 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.652173913 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138909832912 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341177846439 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331385874922 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074624382267 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319433583186 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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