the fossils of T.rex
The reading passage, says that the 70 million year old fossil of T.rex still contain remains of the actual tissues of the animal because of some remaining of blood vessels, red blood cells and collagen matrix in broken bone. The lecturer casts doubts on the reasons which in provided by the reading.
First, the reading passage discusses that the small channels inside the leg bone correspond to the hollows of blood vessels. The lecturer rejects this point and explains that because of living bacteria in bones these hallows are residue of bacteria in these tissues.
Second, the reading passage states that presence of spheres could be the remains of blood cells in bones. The Professor, however, disagrees with this and claims that fossils of primitive animals does not have red blood cells and it shows that these red materials are reddish mineral which were seen in the bones.
Last, the reading passage points out that some performed test on the dinosaur leg bone shows that it contained collagen. The professor, refutes the idea and explains that collagen does not belong to the fossils of animal more than one million years ago, this tissue cannot remain more than one hundred years. It could be from a part of body like human's skin.
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'second', 'so', 'still']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.321739130435 0.261695866417 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.121739130435 0.158904122519 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0565217391304 0.0723426182421 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0260869565217 0.0435111971325 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0130434782609 0.0277247811725 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.165217391304 0.128828473217 128% => OK
Participles: 0.0173913043478 0.0370669169778 47% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.15021769392 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00869565217391 0.0208969081088 42% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00434782608696 0.00154638098197 281% => OK
Determiners: 0.134782608696 0.128158765124 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0130434782609 0.0158828679856 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00869565217391 0.0114777025283 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1247.0 1645.83664459 76% => OK
No of words: 211.0 271.125827815 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90995260664 6.08160592843 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.04852973271 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374407582938 0.374372842146 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274881516588 0.287516216867 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137440758294 0.187439937562 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0521327014218 0.113142543107 46% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.15021769392 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554502369668 0.539623497131 103% => OK
Word variations: 51.2017354361 53.8517498576 95% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4444444444 21.7502111507 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4706017123 49.3711431718 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.555555556 132.220823453 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 21.7502111507 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.878197800319 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 50.9325961032 50.5018328374 101% => OK
Elegance: 3.13513513514 1.90840788429 164% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478622502879 0.549887131256 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138620464367 0.142949733639 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0649378265465 0.0787303798458 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.663801236736 0.631733273073 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170897408916 0.139662658121 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227485875913 0.266732575781 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100449202325 0.103435571967 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.454540628827 0.414875509568 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0798918832512 0.0530846634433 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330416804385 0.40443939384 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727583950099 0.0528353158467 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.