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The article states that in the United States there is an apportunity for emloyees to work four days of week and it will have benefits for both company and workers and provides three reasons of support. In contrast the professor explains that four-day work program will not increase company profit and it will be harmfull for workers too and repudiates each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that, four-day week work will benefit the economy beacuse companies will pay lower for workers furthermore they will have more alert workers. Conversely. the speaker refutes this point by imparting that four-day work will have a bad effect on economy and companies have to spend more money to employ someone else to work and employing more people will requires more office space and computers.
In addition, the passage posits that one of the primary benefits of this option is reducing unemployment because a new employee could hire instead of other four-day employees.However the lecture says that four-day work will raise the employment expectations from workers because they expect their employees to finish all the work in four days so the job will lose interest for workers.
Finally, the text contends that in four-day job employees will have more free time to attend their families and following individual interests so they will have higher quality of life.On the countrary, the lecturer opposes this point by expressing that four-day workers will have lower job stability because they are on the risk of loosing their jobs and it will reduce theire quality of life.
Sentence: Conversely. the speaker refutes this point by imparting that four-day work will have a bad effect on economy and companies have to spend more money to employ someone else to work and employing more people will requires more office space and computers.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to will and requires
on the risk of loosing their jobs
on the risk of losing their jobs
Sentence: The article states that in the United States there is an apportunity for emloyees to work four days of week and it will have benefits for both company and workers and provides three reasons of support.
Error: emloyees Suggestion: employees
Error: apportunity Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In contrast the professor explains that four-day work program will not increase company profit and it will be harmfull for workers too and repudiates each of the author's reasons.
Error: harmfull Suggestion: harmful
Sentence: First, the reading claims that, four-day week work will benefit the economy beacuse companies will pay lower for workers furthermore they will have more alert workers.
Error: beacuse Suggestion: because
Sentence: Finally, the text contends that in four-day job employees will have more free time to attend their families and following individual interests so they will have higher quality of life.On the countrary, the lecturer opposes this point by expressing that four-day workers will have lower job stability because they are on the risk of loosing their jobs and it will reduce theire quality of life.
Error: countrary Suggestion: contrary
Error: theire Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
Double check spelling errors.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-rater is sensitive.
Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 6 12
No. of Words: 262 250
No. of Characters: 1308 1200
No. of Different Words: 138 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.023 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.992 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.356 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 43.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.606 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.558 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.852 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.197 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4