jet stream
The information in the reading passage is about Jet stream which is a mass of wind at about 20,000 feet in troposphere and usually, flows from west to east with the average speed of 190 miles per hour. The professor in the lecture provides some examples about this kind of wind.
According to the reading passage, the main reason of flowing jet stream is different temperature. So, in the winter because of more difference between the temperature of troposphere and the surface the jet stream would be stronger. Two main jet stream between the equator and the North Pole are the subtropical and the polar jet stream that are produced because of difference temperature.
In the listening passage the professor states that because the jet stream separates cold weather in north from warm weather in south, is called Polar jet stream. In addition he explains how air lines are affected by jet streams, giving an example of how a trip from Los Angeles to New York would be shorter than the opposite direction because the latter is against the jet stream. Flying against this stream causes more consuming of fuel as well and the airplane will be experienced more turbulence. The professor also claims that the weather and the storms are influenced by jet streams.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...n south, is called Polar jet stream. In addition he explains how air lines are affected ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'in addition', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.327510917031 0.261695866417 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.126637554585 0.158904122519 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0655021834061 0.0723426182421 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0218340611354 0.0435111971325 50% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00436681222707 0.0277247811725 16% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.174672489083 0.128828473217 136% => OK
Participles: 0.0393013100437 0.0370669169778 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54442837161 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0131004366812 0.0208969081088 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.135371179039 0.128158765124 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0131004366812 0.0158828679856 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0174672489083 0.0114777025283 152% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1267.0 1645.83664459 77% => OK
No of words: 215.0 271.125827815 79% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89302325581 6.08160592843 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.04852973271 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362790697674 0.374372842146 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274418604651 0.287516216867 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158139534884 0.187439937562 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102325581395 0.113142543107 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54442837161 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 145.348785872 78% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53023255814 0.539623497131 98% => OK
Word variations: 48.098712766 53.8517498576 89% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8888888889 21.7502111507 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5103201079 49.3711431718 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.777777778 132.220823453 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 21.7502111507 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.878197800319 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 51.330749354 50.5018328374 102% => OK
Elegance: 3.54285714286 1.90840788429 186% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278675344652 0.451937469235 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.210342680656 0.142949733639 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.118122379248 0.0787303798458 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.711285220153 0.631733273073 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142315388935 0.139662658121 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176697966698 0.21790590567 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100842275383 0.0871468918476 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.525470731161 0.414875509568 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0793417735741 0.0530846634433 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226883656093 0.332364718235 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862563074174 0.0446026805963 193% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.62251655629 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
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Not in a correct format.
The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%) but more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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