Plastic bags
The lecturer is in favour the opinion concerning what article offered.
In the article it is stated, that across United States all groceries provide costumers with plastic bags.Despite the fact that they cost very little, using them is connected to huge amount of money for groceries. Furthermore,they bring a lot of damage. Reusable bags will reduce environmental waste and decrease usage of petroleum, that is main component in plastic bags.
The lecturer finds deeper and hiding results. The first argument to take into account is, used plastic bags are thrown into the land or land field. It can cause serious damages to both, environment and animals. Moreover it can take years plastic bag to decompose. Duration varies from 7 year to 1000 in rarely cases. Another key point he mentions is, that grocery stores use plastic bags daily, that causes increased fees. Moreover, costumers who are given 3-4 plastic bags at stores, throw majority of them. The most persuasive argument is, that plastic bags are composed with petroleum, that is not renewable source. By using reusable plastic bags, will save a lot of petroleum. Lecturer states, that 1,6 billion petroleum is used to produce 360 billion plastic bag. Furthermore, this change will save millions of dollars.
All in all, by the points of view we can see that there are mainly disadvantages in using plastic bags. By replacing them, environment will become more protected and huge amount of non-renewable source will be saved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Despite
...ies provide costumers with plastic bags.Despite the fact that they cost very little, us...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...ount of money for groceries. Furthermore,they bring a lot of damage. Reusable bags wi...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...mages to both, environment and animals. Moreover it can take years plastic bag to decomp...
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Line 5, column 547, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m. The most persuasive argument is, that plastic bags are composed with petroleu...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sive argument is, that plastic bags are composed with petroleum, that is not ren...
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Line 5, column 663, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y using reusable plastic bags, will save a lot of petroleum. Lecturer states, tha...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., environment will become more protected and huge amount of non-renewable source ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 243.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16049382716 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64963698111 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621399176955 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3631439683 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7647058824 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2941176471 21.698381199 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88235294118 7.06452816374 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435089136921 0.272083759551 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14688982076 0.0996497079465 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144257251477 0.0662205650399 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195948469734 0.162205337803 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187219711915 0.0443174109184 422% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.0289183223 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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