The reading contends that it is beneficial for businesses and employees when converted to a 10-hour-a-day, 4-day workweek. However, the lecturer bring about several points that contradict this argument.
First of all, the lecturer questions the validity of the reading passage that the conversion will reduce considerable expenses for the average employee. This is attributed to the fact that it is true that the cost of gas and vehicle maintenance will be eliminated by the conversion. However, according to the survey, most commuters have driven approximately 30mile for reaching their business place. In addition, it only costs 50$ to reach their working places. Thus, the reading passage’s first point is not convincing.
Moreover, the lecturer cast doubt on the idea in the reading passage that a 4-day workweek will cut the operating expenses of most businesses. This is because even if the expenses will be cut, companies might have lost benefits about 20% in terms of business viewpoint, compared to 5-day workweek. Consequently, the reading passage’s second point is not reasonable.
Last but not least, the lecturer disagrees with the idea in the reading passage that improving the ability of employees to spend time with their families will results from a 4-day workweek. It is obvious that in order to make up 40 hours a week, employees have to work 10-hours-a-day. However, it makes difficulties for their young children to stay at day care facilities more longer than before and but also for their parents to find suitable day care facilities for longer. As a result, the reading passage’s last point is contradicted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading contends that it is benefici...
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Suggestion:
... points that contradict this argument. First of all, the lecturer questions the...
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Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
...iness place. In addition, it only costs 50$ to reach their working places. Thus, th...
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Suggestion:
...'s first point is not convincing. Moreover, the lecturer cast doubt on the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...apos;s second point is not reasonable. Last but not least, the lecturer disagre...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
... to spend time with their families will results from a 4-day workweek. It is obvious th...
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Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'longer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: longer
...children to stay at day care facilities more longer than before and but also for their pare...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264705882353 0.261695866417 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.130718954248 0.158904122519 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0816993464052 0.0723426182421 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.062091503268 0.0435111971325 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0326797385621 0.0277247811725 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107843137255 0.128828473217 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0424836601307 0.0370669169778 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00027708629 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0326797385621 0.0208969081088 156% => OK
Particles: 0.00326797385621 0.00154638098197 211% => OK
Determiners: 0.101307189542 0.128158765124 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0196078431373 0.0158828679856 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00980392156863 0.0114777025283 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1656.0 1645.83664459 101% => OK
No of words: 263.0 271.125827815 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.29657794677 6.08160592843 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.04852973271 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361216730038 0.374372842146 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326996197719 0.287516216867 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.239543726236 0.187439937562 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15969581749 0.113142543107 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00027708629 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543726235741 0.539623497131 101% => OK
Word variations: 53.6954263317 53.8517498576 100% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0529801325 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7857142857 21.7502111507 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3250646219 49.3711431718 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 132.220823453 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 21.7502111507 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.39072847682 206% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.4853340576 50.5018328374 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.84057971014 1.90840788429 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300987567739 0.549887131256 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10739472385 0.142949733639 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0851503289891 0.0787303798458 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.541746375052 0.631733273073 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159490117359 0.139662658121 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12731241925 0.266732575781 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728417911869 0.103435571967 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.413106485191 0.414875509568 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0825460646138 0.0530846634433 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217728236099 0.40443939384 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512529098324 0.0528353158467 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.