Professors are normally found in university classrooms, offices, and libraries doing research and lecturing to their students. More and more, however, they also appear as guests on television news programs, giving expert commentary on the latest events in the world. These television appearances are of great benefit to the professors themselves as well as to their universities and the general public.
Professors benefit from appearing on television because by doing so they acquire reputations as authorities in their academic fields among a much wider audience than they have on campus. If a professor publishes views in an academic journal, only other scholars will learn about and appreciate those views. But when a professor appears on TV, thousands of people outside the narrow academic community become aware of the professor’s ideas. So when professors share their ideas with a television audience, the professors’ importance as scholars is enhanced.
Universities also benefit from such appearances. The universities receive positive publicity when their professors appear on TV. When people see a knowledgeable faculty member of a university on television, they think more highly of that university. That then leads to an improved reputation for the university. And that improved reputation in turn leads to more donations for the university and more applications from potential students.
Finally, the public gains from professors’ appearing on television. Most television viewers normally have no contact with university professors. When professors appear on television, viewers have a chance to learn from experts and to be exposed to views they might otherwise never hear about. Television is generally a medium for commentary that tends to be superficial, not deep or thoughtful. From professors on television, by contrast, viewers get a taste of real expertise and insight.
Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they oppose specific points made in the reading passage.
There are many points in reading passage states that a professor should appear for a tv program. How the professors benefit themselves appearing on television but in a lecture, many disadvantages kind of drawbacks for a professor is stated. Mainly two drawbacks are explained here.
Firstly, For any professor to appear on tv is a good thing but there may be a disadvantage for him. Many other professors have questions and they see him with that point of view who shares his knowledge on tv. For outsiders, it tends to be great but for a professor, it is not so good. It is a disadvantage for him. The professor who appears on tv isn't invited to important meetings conducted by the college. He doesn't get money for his research from college. Furthermore, For any professor appear on television wastes his time in deciding what to present on it. He has to prepare for it in advance. He is appearing on tv so that Rehearsal time, make up time, travel time all these are waste of time. If a professor is not appearing on tv than he can do a research and prepare notes for students in wasted time.
Secondly,All the people who are watching tv after dinner that is relaxing time for themselves. They might not like to watch academic subject in that free time. Tv is not that serious medium for study so that people don't consider it very seriously. For any professor, he can not present all the details of his research on television. For any journalist, it is easy to do that small research on a topic. There is no need of any expert professor for this. So that it is not that much feasible and reputable for any professor to come up on tv.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: disadvantages'; disadvantage's
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'as to', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231003039514 0.261695866417 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.155015197568 0.158904122519 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0577507598784 0.0723426182421 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0455927051672 0.0435111971325 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0729483282675 0.0277247811725 263% => OK
Prepositions: 0.158054711246 0.128828473217 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0273556231003 0.0370669169778 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71487087175 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0243161094225 0.0208969081088 116% => OK
Particles: 0.00607902735562 0.00154638098197 393% => OK
Determiners: 0.0851063829787 0.128158765124 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0151975683891 0.0158828679856 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0182370820669 0.0114777025283 159% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1640.0 1645.83664459 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 271.125827815 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5033557047 6.08160592843 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.04852973271 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288590604027 0.374372842146 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228187919463 0.287516216867 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184563758389 0.187439937562 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124161073826 0.113142543107 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71487087175 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476510067114 0.539623497131 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.5761962996 53.8517498576 86% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0529801325 153% => OK
Sentence length: 14.9 21.7502111507 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2946549723 49.3711431718 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 132.220823453 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 21.7502111507 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.878197800319 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.39072847682 236% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.7187919463 50.5018328374 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.52222222222 1.90840788429 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174190448674 0.549887131256 32% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105485285243 0.142949733639 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.073430165558 0.0787303798458 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.465286545158 0.631733273073 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120489604234 0.139662658121 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746289595392 0.266732575781 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051106504063 0.103435571967 49% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.462413757826 0.414875509568 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.144979384443 0.0530846634433 273% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141273671471 0.40443939384 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241984216836 0.0528353158467 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.26048565121 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.62251655629 166% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Not in a correct format.
The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%) but more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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