Recently, there has been a debate about a measure called "salvage logging" to help the forest recovery after fire and disaster. Salvage logging means removal of dead trees after disasters and fire.
The author in the reading passage supports this approach, he believes that is really helpful for rapid recovery of forests. While the professor in the lecture holds another believe and he thinks that salvage logging would be so harmful to nature and it is not necessary as the author assume.
First of all, the professor refutes the idea of the author that removing of dead tree would give more space for new trees to grow in the same area. Despite that, removing the tree would remove the important nutritions that the soil may get from the decompositions of dead trees, which is really important for the soil and so helpful for the new trees to grow. So, the removal of the tree might lead to further damage to this area.
Second, the lecture maintains an opposite side of view regarding the bad impact of the decompositions of dead trees on forests. However, this decompositions material would be a good habitat for the insects like spruce bark beetle, actually, this kind of insects are already living there for a long time and they don't have bad influences on the forest. On the other hand, the decomposing trees would be a great habitat for birds as well, which in turn, have a very good influence on the forest in the long run. By this point, the professor successfully argues the second benefit of the salvage logging that the author mentioned in the text.
Finally, the speaker completely disagrees with the author point about the economic advantage of this approach, he explains that by saying, the wood that has gotten from the damaged area would not last for a long time, in other words, it is restricted resource of wood. In addition, to get this wood to the industries, they have to use helicopters and it is really expensive way of transportations, also the jobs opportunities that the salvage logging would provide, they would be temporary jobs and actually attracted the foreign experts, not to the local workers.
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...y living there for a long time and they dont have bad influences on the forest. On t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, however, may, really, regarding, second, so, well, while, in addition, kind of, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 335.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77910447761 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57306853121 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49552238806 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6417974957 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.545454545 110.228320801 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4545454545 21.698381199 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4545454545 7.06452816374 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133002762887 0.272083759551 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602534511149 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296847031939 0.0662205650399 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848903915634 0.162205337803 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225147685506 0.0443174109184 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.3589403974 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.8541721854 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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