TPO 20 – Integrated

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TPO 20 – Integrated

Both reading and lecture discuss about the effects of natural forest fire on the Yellow stone Park. The reading claims that natural forest fire makes some damages for Yellow stone Park, and it is so destructive. However, the lecture casts a shadow doubt on what is mentioned in the reading and presents some evidence to refute all of them.

First of all, in the passage of reading, the writer points out that most of the park's tree and other vegetation are damaged by natural forest fire. In contrast, the lecture asserts the fact that forest fire can be creative. For example, it make to grow new colonizes of plants, and the seed of new small species plants spread all around even the highest level of the park. In addition, after the fire park deserves to flourish new plants.

Secondly the writer argues that just small species animal can escape from forest fire, and it has an effect on the wildlife. On the contrary, the speaker mentions the view that the forest fire creates new chance for establishing ideal habitat for other animals such as rabbits. In addition, forest fire creates stronger food for animals than before fire. In addition, by growing new small plants, new and certain foods which are needed for animals are accessible.

Thirdly, the reading posits that the rate of tourist attraction is decrease by forest fire. Conversely, the lecture dismisses the issue by explaining that the fire can have an effect on the tourists, if it happens each year. As a result, it is so unusual that fire will happen other years, so after fire tourist return to the park. In addition, the fire does not have any negative effects on the Yellow Stone Park.

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it make to grow new colonizes of plants
it makes to grow new colonizes of plants

forest fire creates stronger food for animals than before fire.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?

the rate of tourist attraction is decrease by forest fire.
the rate of tourist attraction is decreased by forest fire.

fire will happen other years
the fire will happen in other years

tourist return to the park
tourists return to the park

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2

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Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 12
No. of Words: 289 250
No. of Characters: 1336 1200
No. of Different Words: 143 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.123 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.623 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.147 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.267 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.234 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.933 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.589 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4