TPO 20, Integrated
The passage mainly explains that policy "let it burn" was not useful about burning in Yellowstone since it hurts to there negatively. However, the lecture introduces some evidences that undermine such claim.
First, the article claims that Yellowstone fire terrigeted huge damage to the plants in the park. The professor casts doubt this point by saying that vegetation condition became better after burning because new plants clonized Yellowstone It is argued that more diversity in floral reasoning that they found new opportunity for growing. So, for example, smaller plans are encountered by better condition for living, or seeds are germinated under high temperature due to fire.
Second, a lot of animals were affected by Yellowstone fire because of destruction in their habitats, as the author claims, is repudiated by the lecturer. She mentions that animals had found ideal habitats for debuting new life because new plants are provided new habitats for themselves like hair, rabit and predator of these animals.
Third, the reading points that burning is turned park to a unattractiveness place for tourism. In contrast, the speaking says that Yellowstone became more dense than past after burning because of more precipitation. That attracted more tourism for visiting from there.
The professor casts doubt this point
The professor casts doubt on this point
It is argued that more diversity in floral reasoning that they found new opportunity for growing.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
a lot of animals were affected by Yellowstone fire because of destruction in their habitats, as the author claims, is repudiated by the lecturer.
Description: what is the subject for 'is'? can you re-write this sentence?
because new plants are provided new habitats for themselves
because new plants are providing new habitats for themselves
because new plants are provided by new habitats for themselves
a unattractiveness place
a unattractive place
Sentence: First, the article claims that Yellowstone fire terrigeted huge damage to the plants in the park.
Error: terrigeted Suggestion: triggered
Sentence: The professor casts doubt this point by saying that vegetation condition became better after burning because new plants clonized Yellowstone It is argued that more diversity in floral reasoning that they found new opportunity for growing.
Error: clonized Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: She mentions that animals had found ideal habitats for debuting new life because new plants are provided new habitats for themselves like hair, rabit and predator of these animals.
Error: rabit Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Third, the reading points that burning is turned park to a unattractiveness place for tourism.
Error: tourism Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: unattractiveness Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 201 250
No. of Characters: 1064 1200
No. of Different Words: 127 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.765 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.294 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.693 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.117 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.65 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4