tpo 21 the genetically modified trees
The material discusses the concept of using genetically modified trees, While the reading states that this approach has a number of benefits, the listening challenges certain points and states that genetically modified trees have serious problems and costs.
First, the author mentions that genetically modified trees are designed to be harder than natural trees. On the other hand, the professor contradicts this and says that, of course, genetically modified trees are resisted to a particular condition, but natural trees are genetically diverse. The professor states that if the natural trees are damaged with a specific condition, some individuals could resist it and survive. However, the genetically modified trees are genetically uniformed, so if they are exposed to a certain condition they have not been designed for, they all will die and completly wiped out.
Second, the reading claims that genetically modified trees have economic benefits. On the contrary, the listening opposes this and posits that this approach has a hidden cost. the professor mentions that the cost of the genetically modified seeds are higher than the cost of natural seeds. Moreover, the lecturere states that if the farmers collect
the genetically modified seeds and recutivate them, by law, they should repay the companies every time they plant them.
Third, the author posits that genetically modifed trees can prevent overexploitation of wild trees. Conversely, the professor challenges this and says that genetically modifies trees cause more damage to local wild trees. The lecturer explains that genetically modified trees grow aggressively and compete with the natural trees for natural resoures, such as sunlight, soil nutrients and water. The professor states that genetically modified trees are planted among natural trees, thus they can damage native trees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, thus, while, of course, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 283.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59717314488 5.08290768461 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70054376155 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47703180212 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8088894804 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06452816374 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.524973943609 0.272083759551 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237825260846 0.0996497079465 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103343475954 0.0662205650399 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310004933364 0.162205337803 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118393016852 0.0443174109184 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.2367328918 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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