TPO 21, integrated.
The passage mainly explains that genetic modification is lucrative for trees. However, the lecture introduces some evidences that undermine such claim.
First, the article claims that genetic modification is made a tree with more resistance than natural tress front of pest, diseases etc. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that genetic modification is done in unncessary aspects. In addition, natural trees have more diverce genetic for resisting against of pests bad climate and so fart, while modified tees are reistance in one aspect: therefore, they cannot survive in unpredicted bad condition like bad climate or new pests since they have unit genetic properties.
second, genetic modification bering a lot of economic benefit for farmer like fast growing and more productive, as the author claims, is repudiated by the lecturer. She mentions that genetic modifications' companies should invest huge money for making modified trees and collecting their seed for new planting. Hence, it is costly for companies and farmer because they should pay more.
Third, the reading points that genetic modification could protect from natural trees because human overuse from trees, while modified trees are much fast for replacing cut trees. In contrast, the speaking says that modified trees hurt to natural trees since they become compete for natural trees in order to use from soil nutrient, sun light and so forth.
genetic modification is made a tree with more resistance
genetic modification made a tree with more resistance
genetic modification has made a tree with more resistance
while modified tees are reistance in one aspect:
while modified tees are resistant in one aspect:
genetic modification bering a lot of economic benefit for farmer
genetic modifications bring a lot of economic benefits for farmers
Sentence: In contrast, the speaking says that modified trees hurt to natural trees since they become compete for natural trees in order to use from soil nutrient, sun light and so forth.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to soil and nutrient
Sentence: First, the article claims that genetic modification is made a tree with more resistance than natural tress front of pest, diseases etc. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that genetic modification is done in unncessary aspects.
Error: unncessary Suggestion: unnecessary
Sentence: In addition, natural trees have more diverce genetic for resisting against of pests bad climate and so fart, while modified tees are reistance in one aspect: therefore, they cannot survive in unpredicted bad condition like bad climate or new pests since they have unit genetic properties.
Error: diverce Suggestion: diverse
Error: reistance Suggestion: resistance
Error: unpredicted Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: second, genetic modification bering a lot of economic benefit for farmer like fast growing and more productive, as the author claims, is repudiated by the lecturer.
Error: bering Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 9 12
No. of Words: 224 250
No. of Characters: 1177 1200
No. of Different Words: 136 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.869 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.254 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.483 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.827 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.425 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.708 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4