TPO 22, Integrated
The passage explains that ethanol is not suitable alternative for gasoline due to similar disadvantages. The lecture, however, introduces some evidences that undermine such claim.
First, the article claims that ethanol cannot solve global warming owning to carbon dioxide from gasoline since ethanol emits carbon dioxide to atmosphere, too. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that although ethanol releases carbon dioxide into natural, it is made from plants like corn, which aborb huge carbon dioxide as nutrient and remove this gas from environment.
Second, overuse from ethanol hurts to farmer animals' diet since these animals eat plant like corn, as the author claims, is repudiated by the lecturer. He mentions that ethanol is made from cellules in the plant not other nutrient parts. It does not eat by the animals. Thus, useing from plants for making ethanol never reduce plants available for the animals.
Third, the reading points that ethanol is so expensive and cannot compete with gasoline in price aspect. In contrast, the speaking says that in the future, ethanol will be compete with gasoline price because people more use from ethanol as fuel, and it provides a condition for increasing product and diminishing price.
is not suitable alternative
is not a suitable alternative
useing from plants for making ethanol never reduce plants
using from plants for making ethanol never reduces plants
because people more use from ethanol as fuel
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that although ethanol releases carbon dioxide into natural, it is made from plants like corn, which aborb huge carbon dioxide as nutrient and remove this gas from environment.
Error: aborb Suggestion: abort
Sentence: Thus, useing from plants for making ethanol never reduce plants available for the animals.
Error: useing Suggestion: using
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 199 250
No. of Characters: 1025 1200
No. of Different Words: 118 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.756 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.151 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.305 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.586 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.414 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.685 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4