TPO 27
In the reading passage, the author claims that thre are three viable explanations for the occuring of the littel ice age, which occured approximately form 1350 to 1900CE. However, finding all the ideas implausible and questionable, the professor casts dount on what is presented in the lecture and stated that the theories mentioned in the passage were based on outdated information and none of these reasons can be accounted as a cuase associated with this phenomenone.
At first, the author argues that the the glasiers were melted due to unprecedant warm weather and sent the enormous amount of cold streams in to the Gulf stream which ended up with cooling the ephemeral alteration in global climate. On the onther hand, the lecturer brings up the idea that this theory merely clarify the changes related to the East and North of United States. Whereas, the climate change widely happened in soutern Hemisophere including Newsland and South Afirca. Nonetheless, there is not any explanation() for the colling climate in these areas.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that blocking the sunlight by the gases coming form volcanic eruption caused the decreasing in global temperatures. THe professor disputes this idea by clarifying that it is true that sever volcanic eruption can emite massive gases into atmosphere, but there are some other visual indications when this phenomenon occure. For instance, colorful sunlight or grey and brown snow instead of the white snome. But the fact is none of these signs were reported by the people lived in that era of time nonetheless. COnsequently, this theory could have not cuased a substantial drop in globale temperature.
Finally, the author asserts that a dramatic decline in human population within that period by alleviating the green house effect indirectly affected globale climate. The professor, thought, dimisses this idea by subscribing the fact that the human population abruptly started to grow; thus they cut down trees to prepare sufficient food for the increasingly growth population. Indeed, they required their farmland to cultivate crops. Furthermore, the forest only can bring such impact on the global climate if only it lasts for a long time, though we know that the trees quickly had been substituded by the fileds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 35, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...one. At first, the author argues that the the glasiers were melted due to unprecedant...
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Line 2, column 35, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...one. At first, the author argues that the the glasiers were melted due to unprecedant...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e that sever volcanic eruption can emite massive gases into atmosphere, but there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1373.03311258 141% => OK
No of words: 370.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23243243243 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71651067383 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 145.348785872 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613513513514 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 419.366225166 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1509699766 49.2860985944 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.066666667 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23521595132 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635739383911 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390235146802 0.0662205650399 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123257800646 0.162205337803 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251430203755 0.0443174109184 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.3589403974 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.42419426049 116% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 63.6247240618 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.7273730684 182% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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