The reading and lecture both discuss the endonosaurs' migration hypothesis. While the reading provides three claims to support the migration of dinosaurs from north to south slope in winter time in order to survive, the professor refutes, saying none of these claims are convincing.
Firstly, the reading avers that the endmontasour migrate to the south slope to find food during the winter season. On the other hand, the professor questions this idea by saying that they do not have to move during the winter to find food. This is because in the past, this area was warmer than today. In addition, the sun was twenty four hours at the north slope. So, it was enough for plants to grow . As a result, there was a lot of vegetation during the summer. Moreover, when these plants die during the winter, all animals can eat these died plants to survive. So, there is no need for these animals to leave the north slope.
In addition, the article mentions that the edmontosaurus' fossil avers that these animals were living in herds. So, they might migrate in herds. However, the professor contradicts this idea by pointing out that animals live in herds for many reasons other than migration. For instance, the live in herds for protection from any predators. For example, elik live in north United states and they are living in herds, but they do not migrate.
Lastly, the reading mentions that the edmontosaurs would able to migrate because they were running so fast to reach long distance. Nevertheless, the professor states that these animals had young juvinle. Furthermore, these youngs would not be able to live on their own. So, they could not leave their young alone. So, they stayed together at the north slope.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
... to the south slope to find food during the winter season. On the other hand, the professor quest...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-four
...er than today. In addition, the sun was twenty four hours at the north slope. So, it was en...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pe. So, it was enough for plants to grow . As a result, there was a lot of vegetat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 293.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88054607509 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39102824285 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505119453925 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8759097758 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5 110.228320801 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.65 21.698381199 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06452816374 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323951157891 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094470393442 0.0996497079465 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431789632711 0.0662205650399 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186105950252 0.162205337803 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038497371851 0.0443174109184 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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