TPO 42
The article states that glass is so harmful to wild birds, due to the fact that they cannot identify between glass and open air. The reading provides three solutions for the problem. However, the professor refutes each of the solution.
First, the reading posits that replacing the ordinary, clear glass with one-way glass is sound solution. The professor refutes this point by explaining that these glasses reflect like mirrors. According to the professor, the problem is that birds do not understand mirrors. So, using this strategy, birds still will be harmed.
Second, the article claims that another solution is to paint some designs or colorful patterns on regular window glass. However, the professor says that it is not a perfect idea. He assert that as the reading says, it is true that colorful paintings would prevent birds to fly through the glass, but, birds can see the holes, consequently, they fly through them. Meanwhile, architects can make the unpainted areas small, but this method would lead to darkness for people inside.
Third, the reading says that another solution is to use magnetic field to direct birds away from buildings. The professor opposes this point by saying that birds only use this ability when they have a long a trip. He gives an example of a birds' travel from cold places to warmer ones or vice-versa to illustrate the point.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The article states that glass is so harm...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fessor refutes each of the solution. First, the reading posits that replacing...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...trategy, birds still will be harmed. Second, the article claims that another ...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asserts'.
Suggestion: asserts
... says that it is not a perfect idea. He assert that as the reading says, it is true th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lead to darkness for people inside. Third, the reading says that another sol...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'third', 'while', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241379310345 0.261695866417 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.172413793103 0.158904122519 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0651340996169 0.0723426182421 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0498084291188 0.0435111971325 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0306513409962 0.0277247811725 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.095785440613 0.128828473217 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0229885057471 0.0370669169778 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35926704647 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0383141762452 0.0208969081088 183% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.137931034483 0.128158765124 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0229885057471 0.0158828679856 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00383141762452 0.0114777025283 33% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1395.0 1645.83664459 85% => OK
No of words: 229.0 271.125827815 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09170305677 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.04852973271 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371179039301 0.374372842146 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279475982533 0.287516216867 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157205240175 0.187439937562 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0960698689956 0.113142543107 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35926704647 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602620087336 0.539623497131 112% => OK
Word variations: 60.973022201 53.8517498576 113% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0529801325 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3571428571 21.7502111507 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.635054972 49.3711431718 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 132.220823453 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 21.7502111507 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.878197800319 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.39072847682 147% => OK
Readability: 44.3047411104 50.5018328374 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.42424242424 1.90840788429 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.654456535604 0.549887131256 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0921171984891 0.142949733639 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581879141122 0.0787303798458 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.558771856716 0.631733273073 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118578239083 0.139662658121 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.269414738921 0.266732575781 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123329006008 0.103435571967 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.412855080732 0.414875509568 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0583042395415 0.0530846634433 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.466661275917 0.40443939384 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563610308962 0.0528353158467 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.49668874172 200% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.