tpo 47
the reading passage claims that pterosaurs were an ancient group of winged and paleontologists have long wondered whether large pterosaurs were capable of powered flight or they were able only to glide. several argument in the reading passage have been made against powered flight.However, the lecture casts serious doubt on this claim by preseing some counter arguments and examples. she believs that pterosaurs may be capable flight and say several points about capable flight in the paleontologists's body.
firstly, she argues that paleontologists had dense hair that cover their body and hair capable be warm so they need them. additionally hair can maintain body tempreture and this is possitive point. and this possitive situation made energy for them so they can have faster flight. this , However, is contradict to the passage claims that ancient reptiles such as paleontologists were probably cold-blooded as well. cold-blooded animals typically have slow metabolism so they are unable to produce a lot of energy thus powered flight is an activity requiring a lot of energy . it seemed unlikely the paleontologists would have been able to genereted the energy needed to fly.
moreover, it is noted in the reading passage there is a limited to the wight of animals that can be kept airborne by powered flight .paleontologists that were as large as giraffe were probably so heavy. in contrast the lecture clearly state that anatmic's paleontologists were light she says one example in the air borne weight's body reduce.
finally, the speakers points out that take off did not have any problem for these paleontologists on this idea birds use 2 legs for walking and these paleontologists used all legs nevertheless, the text asserts that all animals with powered flight are able to take off from the ground reading pssage noted that on example about bird take off with legs and gain speed but these method would not have worked for large pterosaurs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
the reading passage claims that pterosaurs ...
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Suggestion: Several
...flight or they were able only to glide. several argument in the reading passage have be...
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Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun argument seems to be countable; consider using: 'several arguments'.
Suggestion: several arguments
...flight or they were able only to glide. several argument in the reading passage have been made a...
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Suggestion: However
...e have been made against powered flight.However, the lecture casts serious doubt on thi...
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Suggestion: She
...ng some counter arguments and examples. she believs that pterosaurs may be capable ...
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Suggestion: Firstly
...light in the paleontologistss body. firstly, she argues that paleontologists had de...
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Suggestion: Additionally
...hair capable be warm so they need them. additionally hair can maintain body tempreture and t...
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Suggestion: additionally,
...hair capable be warm so they need them. additionally hair can maintain body tempreture and t...
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Suggestion: And
...tempreture and this is possitive point. and this possitive situation made energy fo...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'flighted'.
Suggestion: flighted
...energy for them so they can have faster flight. this , However, is contradict to the p...
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Suggestion: This
...or them so they can have faster flight. this , However, is contradict to the passage...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hem so they can have faster flight. this , However, is contradict to the passage c...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contradicted'.
Suggestion: contradicted
... have faster flight. this , However, is contradict to the passage claims that ancient rept...
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Suggestion: Cold-blooded
...sts were probably cold-blooded as well. cold-blooded animals typically have slow metabolism ...
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Suggestion: .
...is an activity requiring a lot of energy . it seemed unlikely the paleontologists ...
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Suggestion: It
...an activity requiring a lot of energy . it seemed unlikely the paleontologists wou...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...genereted the energy needed to fly. moreover, it is noted in the reading passage the...
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Suggestion: .
...t can be kept airborne by powered flight .paleontologists that were as large as gi...
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Suggestion: In
...arge as giraffe were probably so heavy. in contrast the lecture clearly state that...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...e as giraffe were probably so heavy. in contrast the lecture clearly state that anatmics...
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Suggestion: Finally
... the air borne weights body reduce. finally, the speakers points out that take off ...
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Line 7, column 372, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this method' or 'these methods'?
Suggestion: this method; these methods
...d take off with legs and gain speed but these method would not have worked for large pterosa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 318.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17610062893 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89978447475 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7601742918 49.2860985944 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.166666667 110.228320801 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 21.698381199 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 4.19205298013 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.54034484063 0.272083759551 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189647944149 0.0996497079465 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120428305449 0.0662205650399 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307727656801 0.162205337803 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060952848882 0.0443174109184 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.