TPO.23
The article states about a fossil evidences towards T.rex dinosaur. Researchers claim that remains of this fossil is relates to T.rex and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor in the lecture casts serious doubt on the passage by using a number of points that are contrary to each of the author's reasons.
First of all, the reading claims that the presence of some ingredients like soft and flexible organic materials in related to blood vessels of T.rex. In contrast, the professor refutes this point by saying that soft flexible tissues are not necessary of blood vessels. He mentions that dinosaurs had died long ago and bacteria ate anything. So it might be moist what scientists have found.
On another hand, the article posits that there are some spheres inner the bones which is remains of red blood cells. However, the teacher describes that it is not an authentic reason. He describes that there is identical reddish that found in other animals at this place. As a result, it may originate from different species.
Finally, the reading makes it clear that leg bone experiment revealed that it contain collagen. On the other hand, the lecturer opposes this point by explain that scientists have never found collagen older than one thousand year. We also learn that it is improbable for collagen to last for a long time. All in all, it does not come from T.rex, but maybe is related to human skin.
Researchers claim that remains of this fossil is relates to T.rex
Researchers claim that the remains ... are related to T.rex
flexible organic materials in related to blood vessels
flexible organic materials is related to blood vessels
So it might be moist what scientists have found.
So it might be moist to what scientists have found.
there are some spheres inner the bones which is remains of red blood cells.
there are some spheres inner the bones which are remains of red blood cells.
there is identical reddish that found in other animals at this place.
there is an identical reddish that is found in other animals at this place.
there is an identical reddish found in other animals at this place.
it contain collagen
it contains collagen
Sentence: On the other hand, the lecturer opposes this point by explain that scientists have never found collagen older than one thousand year.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 12
No. of Words: 246 250
No. of Characters: 1152 1200
No. of Different Words: 147 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.96 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.683 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.351 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.426 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.527 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
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