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In this st of material, the article and the professor disagree about whether dinosaurs were endothermal animals or not. The passage states three considerable evidence proving that those animals were endothermal. However, the lecturer casts doubted those arguments trying to convince us those characteristics of dinosaurs were not necessary enough shows to the passage's theory. Flowing how the listening passage rebuffs the reading.
First, the passage states that the fossils which found in the Polar Slop are real evidence of the endothermal character of dinosaurs. However, the professor suggests that, since the polar region was not cold at the time of dinosaurs, it was warmer than today. Dinosaurs were not necessary need to maintain their blood temperature; they could be hibernated or migrated during winter.
Second, the passage suggests the physical structure of the fossilized dinosaurs enabled them to preserve their body temperature above the surrounding environments. While the lecturer states that the physical structure might help that animal to supports the massive size and more weight growth. Obviously, it was not necessary to maintain the body temperature.
Third, the passage states the presence of Harvesian Canals in some of the fossils, were enough proof for the endothermal theory. Whereas the professor refutes this idea, he explains that those canals usually found in animals who need to grow rapidly at once but those dinosaurs' fossils show that there were stages of growth( rapid then slow then fast ), therefore, it was not good evidence for the endothermal theory.
However, the lecturer casts doubted those arguments
However, the lecturer casts doubt on those arguments
those characteristics of dinosaurs were not necessary enough shows to the passage's theory.
those characteristics of dinosaurs were not necessary enough to show the passage's theory.
Flowing how the listening passage rebuffs the reading.
Flowing is how the listening passage rebuffs the reading.
the fossils which found in the Polar Slop are real evidence of the endothermal character
the fossils found in the Polar Slop are real evidence of the endothermal character
the fossils which are found in the Polar Slop are real evidence of the endothermal character
Dinosaurs were not necessary need to maintain
Dinosaurs were not necessary to maintain
the presence of Harvesian Canals in some of the fossils, were enough proof for the endothermal theory.
the presence ...was a enough proof for the endothermal theory.
Sentence: ... there were stages of growth rapid then slow then fast , therefore, it was not good evidence for the endothermal theory.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to growth and rapid
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 247 250
No. of Characters: 1318 1200
No. of Different Words: 132 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.964 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.336 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.62 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.583 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.673 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.4 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.62 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.152 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4