Were dinosaurs Reptiles or Endotherms?
In the lecture, doubt was expressed about dinosaurs being Endotherm. The lecturer says that the theory stated in the passage was very different and somewhat inaccurate when it claims that dinosaurs were actually endotherms.
First, in the era in which dinosaurs were living on earth; polar regions were much warmer. The temperature in those areas was higher in comparison with today. Even in winter when temperature was lower than other periods of year, dinosaurs could migrate to warmer areas or they could hibernate. So the first reason stated in passage is not exactly true.
Second, it is true that dinosaur's feet were underneath theirs bodies but it cannot be said that just because of this experiment, dinosaurs were endotherms. Here's a fact that this physical structure can support more weight. As a result, dinosaurs could be very huge creatures which had have a lot of advantages for them. So we can conclude from this fact just the opposite of what was said in the passage.
Third, dinosaurs bones do have Haversian canals, but they also have Growth rings, too which shows in which periods of time, the creature had slower growth rate. Studies show that according to Growth rings, dinosaurs had lower growth speed in cooler periods. Reptiles show increases and decreases in their growth rate during their lives, but endotherms always grow rapidly even when the weather is cool. So the third reason is not quite accurate, too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... could be very huge creatures which had have a lot of advantages for them. So we can...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'as a result', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257462686567 0.261695866417 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.167910447761 0.158904122519 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0783582089552 0.0723426182421 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0746268656716 0.0435111971325 172% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0335820895522 0.0277247811725 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123134328358 0.128828473217 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0223880597015 0.0370669169778 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4124813316 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00746268656716 0.0208969081088 36% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0746268656716 0.128158765124 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0223880597015 0.0158828679856 141% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0298507462687 0.0114777025283 260% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1435.0 1645.83664459 87% => OK
No of words: 239.0 271.125827815 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00418410042 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.04852973271 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364016736402 0.374372842146 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242677824268 0.287516216867 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171548117155 0.187439937562 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125523012552 0.113142543107 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4124813316 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594142259414 0.539623497131 110% => OK
Word variations: 60.3025361994 53.8517498576 112% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0529801325 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0714285714 21.7502111507 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5794303869 49.3711431718 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 132.220823453 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 21.7502111507 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.878197800319 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 41.3392109982 50.5018328374 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.45945945946 1.90840788429 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218693731429 0.549887131256 40% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108024062821 0.142949733639 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759109577154 0.0787303798458 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.539704670564 0.631733273073 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136789065531 0.139662658121 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073364405802 0.266732575781 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752456074496 0.103435571967 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.235474416506 0.414875509568 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0709171703155 0.0530846634433 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13432592819 0.40443939384 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252869003516 0.0528353158467 48% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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