Vandalism in Carlton County
According to a Carlton County citizen, it has been noted that, in Carlton County out-of-sate migrants who have moved there few years ago are responsible for increased vandalism in two years, where he doesn't provide any evidence to support the cause. In addition the person who wrote also wants the government to take strict action against those who are immigrants in Carlton County. While there are few things appear to be true but seems specious without any evidence.
It is said that, vandalism has increased over past two years and immigrants are moved over past few years. Since the exact number of years are stated here, we cannot firmly accept this belief. Since immigrants are moved in doesn't mean they are the only responsible for violence and destruction. It could be a political act gain some personal advantage.
Many citizens of Carlton County also think the vandalism is causing because of immigrants. Here, again it cound be a political act to provoke local citizens against immigrants. Moreover, we cannot trust whether it is really said by many citzen or only few. As there is no exact figure mentioned not even a survay has been conducted to know what people want. This could be a political act of local communist party who only wants the betterment of their own people and don't want any foreigners in their land.
Even if government takes some action and reduce the no of immigrants, is there any guarantee vandalism will be permanently stopped. Violence and destruction can be also aroused by local people might be for some of there demands from government. One cannot deny this as a possibility.
In such a way, there are many flaws in this scenario and cannot be considered as a strong argument.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...reased vandalism in two years, where he doesnt provide any evidence to support the cau...
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...e any evidence to support the cause. In addition the person who wrote also wants the gov...
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...ent to take strict action against those who are immigrants in Carlton County. While the...
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...s belief. Since immigrants are moved in doesnt mean they are the only responsible for ...
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...really said by many citzen or only few. As there is no exact figure mentioned not ...
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...ted to know what people want. This could be a political act of local communist pa...
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... the betterment of their own people and dont want any foreigners in their land. E...
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...rnment takes some action and reduce the no of immigrants, is there any guarantee v...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'while', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208074534161 0.25644967241 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.192546583851 0.15541462614 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0993788819876 0.0836205057962 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0652173913043 0.0520304965353 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0341614906832 0.0272364105082 125% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11801242236 0.125424944231 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0434782608696 0.0416121511921 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57852031622 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0186335403727 0.026700313972 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0931677018634 0.113004496875 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027950310559 0.0255425247493 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0186335403727 0.0127820249294 146% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1727.0 2731.13054187 63% => OK
No of words: 293.0 446.07635468 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89419795222 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.57801047555 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331058020478 0.378187486979 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225255972696 0.287650121315 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167235494881 0.208842608468 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126279863481 0.135150697306 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57852031622 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 207.018472906 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525597269625 0.469332199767 112% => OK
Word variations: 52.9500103755 52.1807786196 101% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.039408867 80% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3125 23.2022227129 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.459073283 57.7814097925 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 141.986410481 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 23.2022227129 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.724660767414 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.58251231527 223% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.8380972696 51.9672348444 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.26595744681 1.8405768891 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234871177789 0.441005458295 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101163385139 0.135418324435 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0857813064047 0.0829849096947 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522098811756 0.58762219726 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.198148380002 0.147661913831 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771717218926 0.193483328276 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111589690389 0.0970749176394 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.238172075762 0.42659136922 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0406659441589 0.0774707102158 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140028495988 0.312017818177 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110819321834 0.0698173142475 159% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.33743842365 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.82389162562 71% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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