Transportation in Ho Chi Minh City

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Transportation in Ho Chi Minh City

Nowadays, transportation is one of the necessities of our in life, people have lots of form of transportation such as the car, motorbike, bus, taxi, bicycle and so on. Besides, every people have different things to choose.
Buses, the public bus system is incredibly developed and vast in Ho Chi Minh City. There are over 100 different bus lines and routes many of which serve the districts and tourist locations that are far from the center of the city. Easily distinguished by its white and green exertion, all buses were fitted with comfortable seats and air-conditioning with ticket prices as low as 2.000 for a student.
Bicycles, Bicycles are considered eco-friendly transportation vehicles. In fact, bicycles have been around for so long that it is a very common tradition, especially in Vietnam, that one of the first skill that a young child is taught along with his or her teacher, how to ride a bicycle. Moreover, there are many benefits to riding a bicycle. The health benefits of riding a bicycle are tremendous. A daily or weekly regular exercise regime is hard to maintain because of the lifestyles that we may have. In addition, it's an indispensable means in the sports or picnics of every community, every family and every one of us, even now the bicycle is still the main means of transportation for many people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eople have different things to choose. Buses, the public bus system is incredib...
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...onditioning with ticket prices as low as 2.000 for a student. Bicycles, Bicyc...
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...prices as low as 2.000 for a student. Bicycles, Bicycles are considered eco-fr...
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...festyles that we may have. In addition, its an indispensable means in the sports or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, in addition, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87224669604 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92505705594 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.577771995 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127940005335 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461593588394 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785847047254 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805396441313 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276433523618 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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