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Statement of purpose
When I complete my studies, I intend on returning to Vietnam. I believe in studying abroad especially in Canada, will open more doors for me when I do return back to Vietnam. The opportunities and experiences in Canada will allow me to not only apply the theory but contribute to my developing country. They say, “falling down is an accident, but staying down is a choice.” Since 2010, I have committed myself to be the best I can be, I am an individual that will achieve what I set out to achieve.
I appreciate the time you have taken to consider my VISA application. I hope to hear back from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours truly,
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No. of Words: 117 350
need more content.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 117 350
No. of Characters: 508 1500
No. of Different Words: 81 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.289 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.342 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.715 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 33 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 25 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 16 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.123 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.428 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.428 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.181 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5