Some people think that practical subjects like cookery and woodwork should not be taught in schools, and that only academic subjects are important. Write an article for your school magazine, giving your views.
Practical subjects: a plus for a better life
Since I was a young boy, I have watched my mother cooking almost twice a day, she passed down all her knowledge about cooking to me. Since that day, I have never stopped cooking. Impressive, right ?
Although practical subjects are considered as secondary tasks, plenty are the advantages acquirable from them. First and foremost, we are pacing in a changing era where the infrastructure and teaching methods must change. Touching by hand the small details that life offers is essential, and practical subjects are the most effective of aid.
Moreover, learning practical skills from younger age may help students make a little amount of money to fulfil their small needs and wishes.
Furthermore, Imparting skills such as cooking, or carpentry is fun because the output can be seen and appreciated almost instantly. For instance, in a recent survey done in Florida University, 65% of parents of school going children admitted that their young kids enjoy learning practical skills more than academic subjects.
According to the aforementioned arguments, is evident that practical skills may interest children interest initial stage of life. However, I suggest to master academic subjects in order to have better opportunities and happiness in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tical subjects: a plus for a better life Since I was a young boy, I have watched ...
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...s and wishes. Furthermore, Imparting skills such as cooking, or carpentry is ...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest mastering'.
Suggestion: suggest mastering
...erest initial stage of life. However, I suggest to master academic subjects in order to have bett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39512195122 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81625367434 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668292682927 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4945255494 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120210990582 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416177161397 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367568207605 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594575287927 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356541474719 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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